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MIDDLEWEIGHT: Tech Skillz (1-0) vs. sabre (2-1)
Battles go up on MONDAY Pieces are due SATURDAY (I set battles up rather late this week) Voting ends SUNDAY/MONDAY Rules can be found: here TOPICS FOR WEEK 4: here This is the match for the MiddleWeight Title. Whoever wins will have to defend the title, whoever loses cannot compete for this title the next week. |
checkin in....not sure what my topic will be yet....
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maybe, a spider's web
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using my other extension credit..............
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Extension granted but next time, please do it bit earlier hehe
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Holding A Package Left Him Molded And Savage
Spoke With The Average And Told Then They'd Manage Cartriges Of Stranger Burdans, Helpin The Worries of Others Concealing The Tears...Has His Vision Blurried And Smothered Worried, So Covers His Insicurity With The Pain Of Friends An Everlasting Line Of Insacure Biengs That Will Never Mend Several Bends But None Leading To A Immunisation Or Cure Starring Through The Views Of The Others So His Own Ain't Pure The Barren Wasteland In Which He Dwells Holds No Meaning And The Treament He Needs Won't Be Arriving This Evening For He Stands In The Shadows Of All, Unable To Move Foward And Is Winded By Wisardry To Find The True Imagery Of Horror He Holds A Life Sentence Behind The Wall Of Pain Which He Can't Bear Wakes Up Every Morning To Find His Soul Entrapped There. With No Goal, No Dream, No Point Of Vision To Chase He Strolls On A Stream On A Mission To Find His Place Regreting Never Analyzing His Own Situation And Position He's Left Blind...Unable To See The World...With His Own Vision No Show Verse.......If Sabre Does Show Then Fuck it....Just Vote |
well i do have till tonight to drop...but i thought you used an extension credit? that's why i haven't dropped yet, cause i was planning to do it tomorrow morning
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alright, i keyed something up...mainly because i'm getting drunk tonight and wont be able to drop later on.
this is a thinking piece, enjoy. A Spider's Web the unnoticed in nature, curtained marvel treasures flavors unknown by serpents gardening pleasures such beauty in acres, shadowed by smarter methods a brazier's fire supply lined with cardinal feathers but picture a spider, a natural craftsman her every action in life, devoted to passion every motion influenced by the fashion of her silk emotion is focused everytime that she builds something so small, odd how its so important the truth of it all, is not easily supported what escapes our eyes, shapes entire lives fuels the flame until the fire dies now picture that same spider, beyond what you see her very life consists all in what she weaves her home, her work; her essence is shared yet ignored by the world...not even a care subtle is the truth, her life an example led the well being is ample, compared to better off dead all time exists alike, without noticing the web but all life insists, on hanging on by its threads - |
Damn nce battle
both could have came harder - but still both dropped decent pieces Tech ya started off good then in the middle it was ok but ya started sleeping at the end - i dont think ya put in as much effort as ya thought you would have to and sabre ya did a nce creative piece and stayed on point ya stayed through from beginnin to end for better verse - and being more creative my vote goes to SABRE for explanation above |
Tech's verse was pretty abstract and it was difficult to get into it and see where he was going with it. I thought he did a good job with his flow structure and vocab, but the concept its self needed work...
Sabre's was unbelievable. Great structure, great choice of words, great comparison and a great way to close it off. The imagery and emotion was well felt and although this was a short piece, it delivered a message nicely. This piece really captivated me. Good work both but I have to v/ Sabre |
thanks for voting....uppin for more....nice battle sabre....
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Sabre wins and is MiddleWeight Champ
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