John Doe (A-Bomb Diss)
 

This is a diss to some chump who is startin shit wit my boyz.....kid is gettin the shit kicked outta him here


LINKS

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220592

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220187

^^dunno if u check, but those are replies on songs from TRAKK that i ever used as links yet


LINK TO DISS

www.soundclick.com/snypaakarooftop

Its called JOHN DOE

leave feed, ill RTF

buuummmmmmmmmppppppppp

This was a pretty good diss track. You had a good flow in there, I liked the beat it was pretty good. You used some good punchlines in there that hit hard, and I like the rhymes you used. The rumble part was pretty sick. Stay Up.

8/10

thanks homie....preciate it

uppin

bummmmmmmmmppppp

bbbuuummmmmmmmppppp....wake up people

Aight

Beats Dope

Im Suprised yo!

Flows quite good,lil choppy but koo

Deliverys nice

Emotions koo

Lyrics are koo

I Feelin your dubs,you mixed em different?

Yeah overall:
7/10

Koo Drop!

Rtf On My "What Your Hearing"

aight dis beats pretty good i fuck wit it...lyricz is coo got sum funny lines lol @ prom date shit...flows ok could be slightly harder tho deliverys coo...overall dis was pretty solid not dat bad....keep it up

rtf...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221196

beat nice...................

flows ight falls off a few times.....................

deleveryz nice...................

lyrics r good........................

punches r good...........................

emotionz good in this........................

voice is illy on this diss....................

lol at joystick line.......................

pretty good diss.................

overall 8/10 nice diss keepx at it

Feed used 2/2/06 "hey now------ hard target---------trakk star-------- "