Simple As That ft. Dizaster
 

This is a track wit ma boy dizaster...self explainatory.....

LINKS:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2641236

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2641238


LINK TO TRACK:

www.soundclick.com/snypaakarooftop

It's called Simple As That

Dizaster 1st and 3rd verses (dont have to leave feed on him, he not from this site)
Me on hook and second verse


leave feed and links, ill RTF

bummmmmmmpppppppp

If you go vote for 2 featured tracks ill drop feed :)

man thats bullshit....lmfao

i will if i want to

but i dont HAVE to and i dont need ur feed if u gon be like that

the beat isn't really my style....the hook isn't very good in my opinion...track could use a lil more emotion...flow is good...and the lyrics aren't bad at all...vocab could be upped a tad....overall i'd give this a 7 outta 10...keep droppin

I didnt really like this track as much as your others. The beat was ok, the hook was decent, but both verses need to be improved. Both seemed like you just forced shit to go together to get it done quickly or somethin'. Still it wasnt to bad, and it had some ok rhymes in there.
5/10

aiight...and ayo... WILL APPEAR..i didnt mean to seem like i was trynna beef yo...i mean, i jus ment, if u aint gonna drop feed, then dont type anythin, na'mean....no beef tho

thanks for feed yall

dis beats aiight...dis 1st kid sounds like he's all ova da track lyricz is ok flows ok deliverys not bad but it might be a lil 2 much nahmean...da hooks ok...snypa lyricz is coo sum lines were ok "so hot got da devil sweatin his ass off" *smh* @ dat...flows coo deliverys str8...dizaster again still not really feelin duke dis verse doesnt sound everywhere tho like da 1st verse...but dis track could use sum polishing really overall its decent...keep it up

rtf\...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221196

beatz ight,........................

voice is coo.....................

flows on for most part....................

delverys coo....................

lyrics were nice...................

overal cool verse..................

Feed used 2/2/06 "hey now------ hard target---------trakk star-------- "