rexless vs H.D.
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-02-06 at 05:34 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

H.D. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-06 05:39 PM.

You wouldn’t be a God of War if I nicknamed you Aries
This kid’s as sweet as sugar coated strawberries, dipped in chocolate
HD the original God of War… my dick you need to hop up off of it
From underneath I’ll punch ya balls expose ya teeth through ya esophagus
Ya crew wouldn’t be tight if I stuffed you all in a child’s sarcophagus
Heaven’s Demon the answer the best you do is guess… the best is often us (MC)

rexless has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-06 06:30 PM.

Fire text to fry ya chest, cuz Rex's on a higher step
Wonder why I deny ya respect??--cuz like "retired coal workers", H.D a "minor" vet
Retry ya dialect, ya wordplay make the "M.ic C.annibals" look bad
they couldn't come close to mine if ya "Ripped the M.C" off ya keypad (look down)
but you ain't ready for the long haul, u got pitiful stamina
I spit 45 caliber,-- so u can "take mo' shots" than Kobe witcha digital camera

your done
thanks for playin!

This was feedback posted for rexless
 

pols.............................................. ...

yeah so I'm gonna up this...


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Voted For: rexless

Fire text to fry ya chest, cuz Rex's on a higher step
Wonder why I deny ya respect??--cuz like "retired coal workers", H.D a "minor" vet
Retry ya dialect, ya wordplay make the "M.ic C.annibals" look bad
they couldn't come close to mine if ya "Ripped the M.C" off ya keypad (look down)
but you ain't ready for the long haul, u got pitiful stamina
I spit 45 caliber,-- so u can "take mo' shots" than Kobe witcha digital camera

your done
thanks for playin!
Very hot nic punch about kobe my vote goes to you rtf
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You wouldn’t be a God of War if I nicknamed you Aries
This kid’s as sweet as sugar coated strawberries, dipped in chocolate
HD the original God of War… my dick you need to hop up off of it
From underneath I’ll punch ya balls expose ya teeth through ya esophagus
Ya crew wouldn’t be tight if I stuffed you all in a child’s sarcophagus
Heaven’s Demon the answer the best you do is guess… the best is often us (MC)
I think your verse was tight but you started off weak but you came back in the end good battle

Voted For: rexless

a pretty weak battle all around, neither had flow, all the "punches" were really weak so rexless just barley took it, both of you elevate.................. please, for all of are sakes

vote: rexless

You're kiddin' me right? ... Honestly both verses mine and my opponants flowed rather nicely... once again if you do not undestand something do not vote... If you can not properly pronoun something that falls into the catagory of you do not understand... break up the words that either of us chose to rhyme with and there are plenty of multis in each verse... and as we all know multis make for an easier to follow and over all smoother flow...

Voted For: rexless

-This is an L*F*S* Review-

This was one sided. But both were pretty bad.

H.D.

You wouldn’t be a God of War if I nicknamed you Aries
This kid’s as sweet as sugar coated strawberries, dipped in chocolate

How bout rhyming buddy?

HD the original God of War… my dick you need to hop up off of it
From underneath I’ll punch ya balls expose ya teeth through ya esophagus

If you hit someone upwards then you wouldn't hit their teeth in their esophagus.

Ya crew wouldn’t be tight if I stuffed you all in a child’s sarcophagus
Heaven’s Demon the answer the best you do is guess… the best is often us

Weak. This is a battle. Not Self-Glory Hour.

rexless

Fire text to fry ya chest, cuz Rex's on a higher step
Wonder why I deny ya respect??--cuz like "retired coal workers", H.D a "minor" vet

Pretty good. Word it different next time.

Retry ya dialect, ya wordplay make the "M.ic C.annibals" look bad
they couldn't come close to mine if ya "Ripped the M.C" off ya keypad

Meh.

but you ain't ready for the long haul, u got pitiful stamina
I spit 45 caliber,-- so u can "take mo' shots" than Kobe witcha digital camera

Weak.

Overall: As you can see had iyt not been for rex's opener I'd say tie. But he caught that so he wins. Both can eleveate, mainly in personals and punches. Word.

v/rexless

Voted For: rexless

rexless
Fire text to fry ya chest, cuz Rex's on a higher step
Wonder why I deny ya respect??--cuz like "retired coal workers", H.D a "minor" vet
Good attempt..
Retry ya dialect, ya wordplay make the "M.ic C.annibals" look bad
they couldn't come close to mine if ya "Ripped the M.C" off ya keypad (look down)
No...
but you ain't ready for the long haul, u got pitiful stamina
I spit 45 caliber,-- so u can "take mo' shots" than Kobe witcha digital camera
No...


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H.D.
You wouldn’t be a God of War if I nicknamed you Aries
Follow up?
This kid’s as sweet as sugar coated strawberries, dipped in chocolate
HD the original God of War… my dick you need to hop up off of it
Uhhhh.... no.
From underneath I’ll punch ya balls expose ya teeth through ya esophagus
Ya crew wouldn’t be tight if I stuffed you all in a child’s sarcophagus
No, /spelled wrong.
Heaven’s Demon the answer the best you do is guess… the best is often us
Whack..

Vote: rexless

This battle was so whack, you both deserve a loss for it.

Voted For: rexless

H.D.
You wouldn’t be a God of War if I nicknamed you Aries
This kid’s as sweet as sugar coated strawberries, dipped in chocolate
No real punch.
HD the original God of War… my dick you need to hop up off of it
From underneath I’ll punch ya balls expose ya teeth through ya esophagus
Again no real punch.
Ya crew wouldn’t be tight if I stuffed you all in a child’s sarcophagus
Heaven’s Demon the answer the best you do is guess… the best is often us
No punch.

You need to work on real punches, and not these, "I'm gonna kill you things." Also, try to avoid self glorification, cuz you only got 6 lines, and you wasted a punchline on glorifying.

rexless
Fire text to fry ya chest, cuz Rex's on a higher step
Wonder why I deny ya respect??--cuz like "retired coal workers", H.D a "minor" vet
You still said he was a vet, so this punch has no impact.
Retry ya dialect, ya wordplay make the "M.ic C.annibals" look bad
they couldn't come close to mine if ya "Ripped the M.C" off ya keypad (look down)
This concept could have been good, but your wording is bad.
but you ain't ready for the long haul, u got pitiful stamina
I spit 45 caliber,-- so u can "take mo' shots" than Kobe witcha digital camera
Self glorification and no punch.

Work on your wording of punches, you have the potential, but right now your wording hurts your punches, and you've got ok concepts.
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This is tough, cuz HD didn't really have any punches, and rexless also didn't have any real punches, and if he attempted them, they didn't hit. I guess I vote for rexless for attempting a punch and wordplay.

v-rexless