heres a warning
 

dis is an old ass track i did...after da 1st verse fades theres anutha verse wit a different beat so dont turn it off aight its da 4th track down on da page...get @ me wit sum feedback & shit ya'll...1

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...fm?bandID=71925

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220670
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221190

i'm lovin the violins in the beat....quality is so so...flow is really good....lyrics are off the hook....something i don't really do with too many of my songs except when i'm battling...i'm really feeling this track....i'd give it a 8 outta 10....really good...i really like how the beats change too....keep droppin em

aight dats whats up goodlookin on da feed

Beat: Dope beat

Flow: Nice flow

Delivery: couldve been upped

Quality: decent, could be better, sounds like mine

Lyrics: good lyrics


overall tight track good shit.....7/10
Feed used 2/3/06 "When U Collapse (TraGaDe Diss)"

annnnnnnnnnnndddd the newest memeber of MC is lighting is up on the audio tip...

not really feeling the first beat to tough... But the flow's pretty tight, good on delievery, and emotion for the most part... not as clear as it should be though... Didn't like the 2nd beat too tough either... still lyrically shit was still pretty cool... MC collabos coming soon... HD, Synz, Tu-Khindz, Cannabarz... Gemz be on teh look out yall... Symbolix is back too

send me 2 links and i will reopen this