You aint remix
 

left feed in ike's thread and snypa's thread

track is at the top....

www.soundclick.com/eastsyde

track i re did the older version wasn't as good as this....i like my flow on dis but that's just me...what do y'all think...leave links and i'll leave some feed on your shit too....

listin..................................

beatz ight..................

flows off and on........................

deleiverys on and off too.................

lyrics r plain...........need elevatin..............

voice is ight..................

sounds like u strectchin yer lines out put too many werdz in a bar.......................

notta bad track...............coulda been betta
5/10
wasnt reall feelin it..........no hate but u can def up some things
keep dropin youll git betta
returnt ha favour on my track let it rain

thanks....i left feed for ya

dis beats ok...lyricz is ok not really lyrical or anything...flows ok kinda bland nahmean 1syllable i hate dat shit but dats me...lmao @ quagmire line....deliverys ok could be harder tho nahmean...overall dis was decent it could use sum polishing...keep it up

rtf...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221196

beat wasnt made and i didn't buy it.....i only got like 5 beats that i'm usin for a demo that are original...i'm puttin out a mixtape this summer which this track will go on so once i get that done and a couple side projects i'll begin to work on my demo....thanks for the feed....i'ma post some more tracks up within the next couple of weeks

pm me two links and ill reopen this