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Nick Knack 02-02-06 10:26 PM

T-Dot vs Venture
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-03-06 at 10:26 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

System 02-02-06 10:28 PM

T-Dot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-06 10:28 PM.

System 02-02-06 10:36 PM

Venture has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-06 10:36 PM.

T-Dot 02-02-06 10:50 PM

Venture is fallin off like a denture, skills you dont have see...
If you want to know if this guys whack, then just ask his AVY...
My wordplay holds you up, my punches jam you like busy traffic...
You might as well retire rap, and start learnin' to do graphics...
Like a nervous poker player its easy to read Ventures bluff well...
Sayin' that your good but readin' ya first line is enough to tell...
You tried to be an adventure but the dumby forgot how to spell it...
Claimin' that you the shit, we belive you, cuz we cant smell it...

Nick Knack 02-04-06 12:11 AM

you rep canada? no wonder no one respects ya country theres no1 u can beat,
he is the head of transportation....cuz hez gettin a ticket straight to defeat.*
you aint shit man, you have yet to show people here what youve got,
and when this dude said canadians cant rap, he was right on 'the dot'**
you aint got no weight to carry yet you still fall short, he must be saddled,
how do you lose a battle....when you have never really battled?

*dot is an organization of transport
**http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0...v=glance&n=5174
Look at the 4th review.

Nick Knack 02-04-06 11:50 AM

votez............................................. .........

*Antic* 02-04-06 02:43 PM

Voted For: Venture

Vote - Venture

Pretty weak battle, not a lot of hard punches or crazy word play...personals from both were not all that great...here's how I saw it...

T-Dot took Flow, his was structured better, came off tha tongue better...sometimes it seemed like there were 2 many syllables in some of Venture's bars. Venture took Punches and Personals, because they were more direct, and harder-hitting. T-Dot's punches just didn't land as hard, and the personal in his last bar just didn't have any weight behind it. Venture took wordplay with the one weak attempt in his 2nd bar, otherwise there wasn't any wordplay in either drop...not the greatest battle, pretty weak, but Venture took it because he had harder punches and personals.

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Adam 02-04-06 03:27 PM

Voted For: Venture

T-Dot
Venture is fallin off like a denture, skills you dont have see...
If you want to know if this guys whack, then just ask his AVY...
AVY punches are so newbish..
My wordplay holds you up, my punches jam you like busy traffic...
You might as well retire rap, and start learnin' to do graphics...
Weak...
Like a nervous poker player its easy to read Ventures bluff well...
Sayin' that your good but readin' ya first line is enough to tell...
Whack..
You tried to be an adventure but the dumby forgot how to spell it...
Claimin' that you the shit, we belive you, cuz we cant smell it...
Horrible...

vs.

Venture
you rep canada? no wonder no one respects ya country theres no1 u can beat,
he is the head of transportation....cuz hez gettin a ticket straight to defeat.*
Wordplay is allright..
you aint shit man, you have yet to show people here what youve got,
and when this dude said canadians cant rap, he was right on 'the dot'**
Meh...not bad..
you aint got no weight to carry yet you still fall short, he must be saddled,
how do you lose a battle....when you have never really battled?
Not really feeling..

Vote: Venture

Had some half decent lines as where T-Dot just dropped shit..

Ikaros 02-04-06 05:18 PM

Voted For: Venture

Punches: Venture (Hit a little harder with humor too)
Flow: T Dot (Less packed lines)
Multis: Tie (Not packed or special)
Personals: Venture (Used the Canada thing) (bastard)
Metaz: T Dot (Felt his better)
Wordplay: Venture (T Dot didnt have any)

Vote *Venture* Had it in the end

dazy 02-04-06 05:18 PM

Voted For: T-Dot

t-dot u won u had better rymes and flow and nicer overall

venture u need to elavate u had some kid school rymes u can do better

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

T-Dot 02-04-06 11:17 PM

Uppin...........................................

Nick Knack 02-05-06 02:39 PM

votez............................................. ..

H.D. 02-07-06 03:52 PM

Voted For: Venture

hmmmm T-Dot's opener is forced because avy and see is clearly a forced rhyme... How big is you're vocabulary couldn't you of just used another word or just worded it differently so that it atleast looked like a clean rhyme? ... but it's not like Venture's verse didn't have any obvious flaws either... what does being saddled have to do with falling short? hmmmm nothing at all... so what was supposed to be a punch amounts to just filler...

Still Venture did have the better verse, better concepts, better flow... in a lacl luster battle over all...

Nick Knack 02-07-06 10:55 PM

only need one more vote..............................

Confucius 02-08-06 05:26 PM

Voted For: Venture

ight venture got this one both could have probably do better

venture had better puinches and personals that took it t-dot did aight it was close to me man but i think t lost it cause of this
Claimin' that you the shit, we belive you, cuz we cant smell it...
that line totaly negates itself if we believe he the shit we should be able to smell it so watch it man close battle

return the favor here honestly only need a few votes to end this battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221508


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