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Snypa 02-03-06 04:57 PM

FEATURED TRACK Feb 9-16:What You're Hearing (Snypa & Trakk Star)
 
LINKS

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2643713

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2643715



LINK TO TRACK

www.soundclick.com/snypaakarooftop

its called What You're Hearing

leave feed, ill RTF

Snypa 02-03-06 11:27 PM

bbbuuuummmmmmmmmpppp

wake up

B To The D 02-04-06 06:17 AM

Dont copy my song names!

the beat aint called "What u hearing"

i will leave feed later n geto ur track done today if i can

Edit:
yeah

trakk

flows dope,really improvin

deliverys koo

presence is nice

feelin ur energy

hmmm

lyrics atre koo

good verse

snypa

flows good

feelin ur delivery

emotions kooo

good shit!

Snypa 02-04-06 11:52 AM

well then wuts the beat called then??? cuz thats the name Trakk gave me

B To The D 02-04-06 01:14 PM

cause i sent it to him when i saved it as "waht u hearing"instrumental

trakk*star 02-04-06 01:15 PM

then dont save it like dat foo:shoot:

Snypa 02-04-06 01:21 PM

aiight whatever man...same shit, different tracks....but the other track that u supposed to do UNF, would be greatly appreciated..lmfao

Snypa 02-04-06 04:22 PM

bbbuuuuummmmmppppppppppppp

Paranoid 02-04-06 06:04 PM

trak starr:
I like your voice a lot. but you lack delivery, you need to delivery more hard man, flex your voice a bit if you want or just scream it a little more to fit the beat. your lyrics were good and so was your flow. overall it was decent.

snypa:
you shoulda upped your vocals a bit more to stay on a level with traks because yours are even low for the beat as well. but anyway I thought you had a decent delivery and a good flow. lyrics were staight and pretty much you did a nice job.

overall decent track.

1

Blay'all 02-04-06 06:49 PM

*listening*

feelin the beat...

first verse: a lil bit hard to understand at parts... sounded like you might have kind of held back a little bit

second verse: you sound distant for some reason, but this verse is prolly a lil bit stronger... flowed well on the beat for the most part, especially at the beginning... nice punches... nice metas...

overall 7.5/10 nice track...

trakk*star 02-05-06 01:05 AM

bumped............................................ .....................

GKillaz05 02-05-06 01:20 PM

Trakk Star - You had a good flow, you used good emotion, your had good quality, some rhymes where sick, overall good verse.
8/10

Snypa - You had a good verse as well, liked that coke lines rhyme, it was dope!.. lol, you had good flow, and it was good.
8.5/10

OVERALL - This was a pretty good track I liked the flow, it had a good quality, keep it up guys.
8/10

trakk*star 02-05-06 01:21 PM

werd thanx fer tha feed preciate it................

trakk*star 02-05-06 07:29 PM

bumped............................................ .....

Jonezy© 02-06-06 09:17 AM

First kid

had a str8 verse..good smooth flow..nice cool deliverly..lyrics and shit seemed nice to me from what i heard..a cool verse

2nd dude..same as above really..again nice flow...shit worked well with the beat..nice punches and stuff

good track lads

RTF on my new ones


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