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dazy 02-04-06 05:52 PM

tha 1 an onlii b vs JC REAL
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-07-06 at 05:52 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 02-04-06 06:37 PM

Tha 1 An Onlii B has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-06 06:37 PM.

.:Mike Check:. 02-04-06 06:38 PM

Cmon admit it, you aint a gangsta from tha east*
wearin mittens, even your bitch looks more like a beast**
I dont remember there bein "gangstas" on sesame street***
Your 2-3 and onlii cuz twenty9 is tha onlii 1 you can beat****
I seen you accepted and knew that it was a done deal
Your gonna beating me?I know it Just Cant be for REAL*****

EXPLANATIONS

*He claims he is a gangsta from tha east
**In his member mugshot he was wearin mittens and ppll were bombin on him because he was and they were sayin that his girl looked more manly than he does
***J-Money said that hes a bert and ernie lookin muhfcuka, you know bert and ernie form sesame streeet?...yea ya got it
****He battled twenty9 twice, he battled him once and won, so he lost a couple and went back and decided to battle twenty9 agin so he could get another win
*****it says Just Cant be for REAL,NAMEPLAY, just=J cant=C and then i put REAL

It was done real fast so that is why it is prolly tha shittiest verse i have put on here but its ok...good luck man, and no hate after its all done...word...1

.:Mike Check:. 02-04-06 06:40 PM

tha line that talks bout him bein 2-3, when i wrote this he was 2-3 so i just wanted to clear that up....word...1

System 02-04-06 08:27 PM

JC REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-04-06 08:27 PM.

dazy 02-04-06 08:49 PM

a punk ass bitch, yeah its tha 1 and onlii b
u sayin ur better, u aint even close to me

http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/13/turtlebitch929.jpg

u a ugly ass boy u look like a turtle
im like a trackstar, im jumpin this hurtle*
my rymes break ur leg cus im so hardcore
my lines punching u boy till u hittin the floor**
only reason u like eminem , cus he lets u suck his dick
i go 50 cent on ur ass and hit u wit my magic stick***
me beating ur ass now thats what a fact is
yo face is so ugly ur doctor musta did a malpractice****
u sayin ur better , than give me 1 good reason
u better start runnin b, its turtle huntin season

* trackstars jump things called hurtles he is like a object in my road of life

** play on punches and punching someone

***play on fifty cent's magic stick (his pimp cane) 50 cent sucks!

**** as in the doctor did something wrong with his face

dazy 02-04-06 08:54 PM

no hate and plus i won against another person too

and 29 wanted to battle me again

Ill Spanish 02-04-06 09:51 PM

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 
yo yo yo yoooooooooooooooooooooooooo checkin the polls lol @ the pic

.:Mike Check:. 02-04-06 10:05 PM

dammit i should have put more thought into my verse, but i prolly would have forgotten about tha battle and it wouldve been a no show, its all good, i cant win all my battles, oh well..anyway, uppin for votes

-Substance- 02-04-06 10:21 PM

This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 
lmao......this was a weak battle from both since i've seen way better from B....but since we in the same crew then i can't vote but he definately took this. jc. you need to read some tuts on how to make battles cause you really didn't have any punches

dazy 02-04-06 11:00 PM

ok? that was a wierd post but anyways(talking about tech skillz post)

anyways uppin for votes people

dazy 02-05-06 05:49 AM

uppin on this battle
people vote for me u know u wanna

KempoMRK 02-05-06 10:05 AM

Voted For: JC REAL

Cmon admit it, you aint a gangsta from tha east*
wearin mittens, even your bitch looks more like a beast**
Coulda been worded way better to hit harder
I dont remember there bein "gangstas" on sesame street***
Your 2-3 and onlii cuz twenty9 is tha onlii 1 you can beat****
Ok, but wording
I seen you accepted and knew that it was a done deal
Your gonna beating me?I know it Just Cant be for REAL*****
Nah

a punk ass bitch, yeah its tha 1 and onlii b
u sayin ur better, u aint even close to me
Nah, filler
u a ugly ass boy u look like a turtle
im like a trackstar, im jumpin this hurtle*
So so
my rymes break ur leg cus im so hardcore
my lines punching u boy till u hittin the floor**
Nah
only reason u like eminem , cus he lets u suck his dick
i go 50 cent on ur ass and hit u wit my magic stick***
Nah
me beating ur ass now thats what a fact is
yo face is so ugly ur doctor musta did a malpractice****
Weak concept
u sayin ur better , than give me 1 good reason
u better start runnin b, its turtle huntin season
lol

Tha 1 had less lines which hurt him, u shoulda worked out a line limit at first. JC had some funny stuff and Tha had a couple of ok personals but JC won this due to line amount.

v/ JC

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p4ntzistheish 02-05-06 10:38 AM

This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 
lmao And you were worried B. omg JC you are so ass.

dazy 02-05-06 11:26 AM

me a ass? no not true but antwats uppin for votes people vote jc real


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