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New HOT TRACK *~*~I'm Comin' Out~*~* INTRO FA MIXTAPE
woorrrddd peep, props to fux fa teachin me how 2 mix, this tha intro to my up and comin mixtape yo, hopefully 2 b done byt my b-day , march 15th
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3450193 lyrics are up there to, feed iz appreciated, links comin as soon as the song forum is up and there are songs 2 leave feed, r jus link me 2 ur song thread peaceeeeee |
the uppper rooomm
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Beat's cool man.....nice and hype. You got that same sound like you are stopping after each and every line......like you're recording each line individually. It takes away from your flow. It's not a bad song though......you just need to fix that shit...lol
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flow could be a little better, don't like how you dragged out ya words...should've done it a few bars and then went back to the normal flow... I like the effect you did though, spittin' the 1st part of the bar then back over it with the end of the bar... lottah people don't reaiZe it's a really good techniQue for UPing your emotion cuz you don't really have to worry about your breath so you can concentrate more on emotion...oh yeah, this beat's FUCKin' hawt lol but yeah, up the flow on this and it'll be better :thumbup: |
listenin..beat is hot for an intro real hot...delivery is nice for an intro....lyrics are nice for an intro..im def feelin it...flow is dope....hot shit mayne..u improved ALOT since that ghetto ill joint...CHI TOWN STAND UP lol....def feelin it fo an intro..keep at it..ill get at u fo our collab
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fa sho, preciate tha feed, upppin............
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First time actually really listening to your music...
Beats pretty dope, quality is iffy, not the best but not the worst...Lyrical wise, this was nothing impressive at all...Lyrics and rhyme scheme was waaaaay too simple. Anyone can rhyme words man, but it takes a real emcee to make it sound good and make sense. All I heard you spitting was a bunch of random nonsense that made hardly any sense and was not interesting at all. Wasn't really feeling the flow either, like the way you would stop between words an shit or whatever the fuck you were doing. But whatever, theres my feed. Hate it or love it. |
hey kool song u got some good rymes on there and nice beat it sounded nice
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