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trakk*star 02-05-06 07:08 PM

beef part 1 featuring intermental
 
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3453006








http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221361
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281

L. Veracity 02-05-06 08:23 PM

Trakk, your flow's kewl and so are ya lyrics, raise your vocals just a tad bit, I had to listen harder than I wanted to hear you lol...I'm diggin' the hook a lot

Intermental's verse on here had more energy so I felt his part more, and he used multies so that gave his verse more finess and sound better to the ears

pretty nyce track here, beat's tyte too...keep it up :thumbup:

PrahJect 02-06-06 01:49 PM

Thanks ma uppidy

B To The D 02-06-06 03:19 PM

Ok

Beats Nice

Trakk Your flows ever improving and your deliverys getting even better

the emotion is koo,feeling your lyrics man

i felt inter done better in this,inters verse was more in your face,even with his smooth flow

inter your lyrics were koo,not great though,feeling the way you rocked the beat,presence was koo too

Good shit!

PrahJect 02-06-06 03:36 PM

thanks..........

Tha Q. 02-06-06 03:47 PM

Trak...predictable flow and rhyme scheme. But, what you presented was fairly good.


vocal quality was decent.


beat is acceptable


Inter...slurring too many words

I'm tellin you, your voice sounds like it's gettin deeper track by track

flow was good...held my interest more than Traks


pretty decent lyrics on both parts


no bad dawgs

PrahJect 02-06-06 04:00 PM

Thanks fam........


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