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I'm A Heavy Hitter, Stop Sleep'in
Om & BB, ive text'd w/the wick'd, princes and bless'd kids
so fuck sick punchlines, rex start'd spittin' deathbeds visual methods turn digital in seconds, so deep bro's changed the game so much, new user name is cheat codes R.V god, "REX" killed kids w/4 words 2 fear though then i went & spray paint'd "RexLess, the fucking hero" went from tonto to mach 2 foo', served suckas pronto the molatto bravado, R.V version of a bono gestapo they all came & went, from the dopness 2 the irrelevent word feuds from comments, diss'es, Bloody Knucks patch'ed N knit yet still im hear to vent, time came and went... now REX turn'd it up like joe buttons, got a million fans 2 hit shit with punches, multis and even my own my teaching Realm, i shimmer from mentions, u felt tension as i connect'd a sentence on my parentin' dissention so no matter what forum, i shine bright, i'll never flop & and cant reach new heights, cuz its lonely @ the top left dome pieces flabbergast'd, master'd bastard tactics & if devastation was cologne, REX would reek havok... my words is magic, the savage lion now talks n asterisks and if it aint God Of War, fuck other rappers i collab with.... :cussing: the battles are cool, the respect is low niggas are sleepers i'll rip ya face, cheast and even ya sneakers, my flow feak-nish hard not to peep this, like your 'top peak' being ya "weakness" but im know to be a killah.... never been a quitter my fow, punch and metaphores is a team of heavy hitters.... ya herd! heavy fucking hitters!!! Schooling cats with truthful facts that'll hex your styles Rex sick with the keys like janitorial pedophiles Knocking homos out...similar to hydrocodone Rex's a beast with elegant words like Quasimoto cant fuck with the mo-jo, rich off them pie's still after mo-doe the reason i aint been recordin, is cus im scorchin my mics i've got carpel tunnel syndrome, and it hurts when i write started usin ms word, but it hurts when i type so im freestylin more, gettin nice over night i've got an unusual gift, some call it a curse have you up in the fuckin hospital buzzin a nurse im in battle mode, you should really think about quittin cus i might slice ya fuckin throat before you start spittin i've crafted my flow, punchlines are devistating thinkin of changin my name to half man, half amazing so i've been debating, this entire situation just started back recording, my skills are acceleteratin its my proclamation that im ascending, and aspiring to use my lyrics as a weapon, im assembling and firing at any mothafucka that crosses REX'S PATH cus like a school schdual, came up short N get left with sum like After.Math (label) the battles are cool, the respect is low niggas are sleepers i'll rip ya face, cheast and even ya sneakers, my flow feak-nish hard not to peep this, like your 'top peak' being ya "weakness" but im know to be on the go.... never neen a quitter my fow, punch and metaphores is a team of heavy hitters ya herd! heavy fucking hitters!!! EZ SLUTS! in division dont alway get a whole number after your done with the math problem/ dr dre label is called after-math / leave you with sum/shots the rest is preety self-explanatory.. |
alright for me that shit was off beat and wack. didnt like it, no offense and shit. but most of those words didnt even fuckin rhyme. so get some new beats and try again
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you need links, for this to stay open
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WTF!? What the hell are you talkin about? |
^^ dont worry hes on crack
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upp'in this joint......
can i get some feed plez? |
that was good.
and when you got wack ass scanz saying its off beat. he doesnt know how you meant it man. stay up. |
Like your battle verses theres a lot of multis and a few stand alone hott sections in this... but your structure is flawed... the syallabels do not match up right... some of your multies are just flat out forced... the begining of this was very ocwardly worded... this looks like it wouldn't fit a beat correctly... in text it might pass... in audio you're gonna need ta fix spots... over all this was a cool spit though... keep doing what you do... 1
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i fuckin told u ppl!!!!!!
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thanks for everyone feed back i'll keep practising cool,
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upp'in this drop for more feed-back...
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& if devastation was cologne, REX would reek havok...
nice ^ the rest of the 1st verse kinda sucked...u forced the shit out of it...and half of it diddnt mean nuthing.... but the rest was pritty nice |
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