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Listenin...beat is hot man can u send me this beat plz?....i like the hook style like triple did it....its pretty nice..but i cant hear u too well...verse is hot...flow is crazy...fell off actually one bit but u cant tell rlly...presence is dope...whats wit that my name shit lol...but flow is crazy delivered perfect...emotion is nice..lyrics stand out hot...hook is nice too..jus cant hear it too well...but its nice..2nd verse..flow is nice again...pretty much the same...lyrics are dope...hook is catchy...nice track downloadin 1

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nice ass beat....nice flow...one lil thing that mite help u out more... lower tha vocals in the back kuz it blocks some of ur words and makes it sound like ur fallin off beat....but other than that Good shit...i neva paid u no attention but i mite start listenin now ha good job tho n keep it up

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who made this beat???? its pretty good.... that effect on the hook is sooooooooo bait, needs takin off, its an ok hook i guess, verses are ok.. flow at time is good then at times it sounds robotic and awkward and u seem to "start... spit...tin.. like...this" and a couple of lines you run out of breath, that accent throws me though man, it sounds forced and fake, i dunno cos u say its ur natural accent, but it just sounds so awkward.... quality is good, just the effect on the hook kills it... instead of adding bad effects like that, try recording your hook twice and getting them in sync, and then pan one right by about 30 and then pan the other one left by about 30 and then double up the rhymes in the hook and keep them central but still sitting in the background nicely n farely quiet so they dont over power.... that should work, thats what i normally do and it keeps the hook sounding clean but makes it sit seperate from the verses if u get wat i mean.

ur improving though man, keep it up.. peace.

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nice beat......................................

flowz nice..............................

deleiveryz illy...................................

qualitys better than usual..................

lyrics r doopeness...........................

emotionz sikk...............................

pressence is good........................

justa dope track here i liked errything.......................

9/10
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