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Ikaros 02-06-06 04:14 PM

Ikaros vs Aitz
 
Battle Rules:

4-5 Bars Max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dikridin

Minimum posts to vote: 21

Check in by: 02-08-06 at 04:14 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 02-06-06 04:15 PM

Ikaros has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-06 04:15 PM.

System 02-07-06 02:31 AM

AITZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-06 02:31 AM.

AITZ 02-07-06 02:33 AM

I school beats this kid goes to school in bear feet
I herd Welfare did meet this kids FAM and they fleet cause there ashamed
Skill?..Naw he got trained! I’ll dispose your content in the trash can’
*But still the kid loves the meat in pants don’t go to the bathroom cause he will glance
I can’t piss on the man because it’s been done by others
He’s addicted to it…yo he even drinks his own mother*
I’ll slather your bladder with heavy hits like lightening weather
Till you’re no longer a breather now you and your ancestors will remain together’
**I’ll stomp on Ikaros like mice and destroy him’ cause its heat against ice**
Some chronic weed and a light’ im now smoking cause IV won this fight

Ex.
*look at his avatar*
**Ikaros is something that has mutant mice**

Ikaros 02-07-06 02:34 PM

Why you So-Shit-Dude? Is what you got me contemplatin but I'll split your Whole-in-Two like Body Segregation!

I leave Aitz with ‘Smashed-Teeth’ with them shitty lines you never ‘Pack Heat’ coz your flow sounds constipated like it ‘Lacks-Grease’! *

When I Thrust Through Tuck-your-Cash Run-so-Fast your Hotmail shitnbricks coz you love a bit of shit shoved Up-your-Ass!

Like Awful Cold Weather I leave your Facing/FACE IN a Pole/POLL but I suppose I’m the Champ coz I leave Aitz/8’S In a Hole!

*Hotmail is shitnbricks

AITZ 02-08-06 12:29 AM

alright verse....uppin on vote ppl'

Ikaros 02-09-06 06:02 PM

uppin for votes ppl. c'mon if you want votes back.

H.D. 02-09-06 06:10 PM

Voted For: Ikaros

Well truth be told Ikaros's verse just wasn't taht good... at elast not compared to another verse I read from him either earlier today or yesterday... with that being said AITz did not come btter than Ikaros... his punches were rather uncreative and weak... And his structure was eratic... made for a really uneven flow... Just wasn't feeling it... but you both can and have came much better than you did in this...

Opener: Ikaros (AITZ's was just terrible)
Closer: Ikaros
Punches: Ikaros
Personals: Ikaros though they were all name plays... AITZ coulda of come much harder with the concpet he was using for his personals...
Creativity: Ikaros
Complexity: Ikaros
Structure: Ikaros

Vote: Ikaros
Vote: Ikaros

$howtim3 02-09-06 06:15 PM

Voted For: Ikaros

decent battle.
obviously voted for Ikaros.
he had a better structured verse and came harder with the punchlines.

he pretty much got him with the last line "Like Awful Cold Weather I leave your Facing/FACE IN a Pole/POLL but I suppose I’m the Champ coz I leave Aitz/8’S In a Hole!" nasty.

Aitz just elevate a little, and you be aight.

.:Mike Check:. 02-09-06 06:19 PM

This was feedback posted for AITZ
 
pollz............................................. .......

AITZ 02-10-06 12:00 AM

werd??????, damn....come on ppl vote. bumpin................

Ikaros 02-10-06 07:25 PM

uppin.............................................

Ikaros 02-11-06 04:27 PM

Draggin On..... Uppppiiiiinnnnnn. VOTE OR DIE! mwahahaha

AITZ 02-22-06 06:12 AM

bumping...............i'll RTF


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