H.D. vs Venture
 

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Check in by: 02-09-06 at 10:45 PM

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H.D. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-06 03:14 AM.

Realize I’ll vandalize ya hide, and pulverize ya pride, you gotta die… I lied
I’ll paralyze this guy, let lyrics fry his mind, and scatter brains inside
Sodomize with pipes, jagged edges twisted in, grenades I’ll fist em in,
Chafe you with wooden paddles splintering, pants are soiled… pissed again?
You run along on hot coals feat blistering, bend over let misters in
Fluids on ya like ya pissed in wind, you have no punches, gotta dis to win


Explanations:

Since some of you don’t know a rhyme when you see one…

Realize, & vandalize rhyme… now vandalize ya hide, pulverize ya pride, gotta die… I lied, paralyze this guy, lyrics fry his mind, scatter brains inside, & sodomize with pipes all rhyme multiple times. Twisted in, & fist em in, also rhyme multiple times. Splintering, pissed again, blistering, misters in, pissed in wind, & dis to win, also all rhyme multiple times.

Venture has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-06 11:18 PM.

he gets shot down by little kids, why you tryin to look tough?
you in debt to people already? no wonder hes had enough.
you aint cannabilistic, when it comes to winning his crew carries him,
you cant eat anyone, so i guess that just makes you a vegetarian.
this crashes and burns faster than a harddrive with a virus,
this kid aint got no booty, and i aint talking about piratez.

you didnt punch man, just multis..................

votez............................................. ....

True... but honestly looking at some of ya other battles...
I didn't think you were gonna come out swinging...
awwww well... ya live and ya learn
Good verse

Voted For: H.D.

VOTE- H.D.
Explanations- Good multies but it looks like you were forcing them...and just thinking of a word that rhymes and throwing it in there and not making any sense with it...

Venture- you had good flow and decent punches but they were kinda basic like you stayed at one level the whole time...u gotta get more depth with your punches...

nice from both tho a close one

wow....thatz amazing...................................

Voted For: H.D.

Vote- HD

Punch heavy, from HD. Concepts weren't amazin', but the heat was there. I liked what Venture dropped, it had this 'Fuck you' nature, but it just didn't carry the violent hatred that HD's verse did.

Here's the breakdown...

Flow- This was a tie. Both catz have completely different styles, and I felt what they were doing with their flows. I didn't like one over the other.

Punches- HD, this was punch heavy, super violent, which I liked. My drops lack violence, I need some, hell, EVERYBODY needs a little violence. Dug some of Venture's punches, but I felt HD's more.

Personals- None...strange...

Wordplay- None, really.

Multis- HD, with the good multis, within and at the end of his bars, good work. Venture had some alright two syllable multis, but HD's overtook him.

This battle was closer than the categories indicate...I really dug what Venture did, it had this real "I could give a fuck" feel, but HD's combination of multis and heavy violent punches took him past Venture. Good battle, both catz did well.

If ya haven't RTF in my battles Antic vs. JC Real and Antic vs. Rexless.

~1~

Voted For: H.D.

i give this one to HD, he came better in this one

^^^that's a gay vote... not even explained..yall should get dat removed

yeah I was thinking tha same thing... ............

he didnt fucking drop punchez. god damn you all are stupid. he dropped multis and im gonna kill shit. i dropped real punchez, maybe not the best punchez, but punchez never the less. he even fucking admitz it.