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H.D. 02-07-06 04:47 PM

H.D. vs JC Real
 
Battle Rules:

5 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-07-06 at 07:47 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

System 02-07-06 04:48 PM

H.D. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-06 04:48 PM.

H.D. 02-07-06 05:05 PM

You rock color contacts ya need to realize, you’re just not a real guy*
Kid I knock you out ya “right” mind, you shoulda “left” when I signed in
Fist ya minds out, tape and rewind it; I’m insane punching ya minds in*
You talking arms, while I’m talking lose two, you sweet like yoohoo*
Just because I choose too, judge, jury, and execute you, go boo who*
I’ll kill you, revive ya soul and trap you in chuck’s sexually confused seed*
You a herb; I abuse trees, fake gangsta’s get taken off, so you lose leaves*
You’re structure would make more sense written on crumpled loose leaf*
With each sentence punches impact so hard they could make a tooth bleed
Point to ya grill when voters tell me show us the proof please? Truth leads
To the matter of speaking, comedy? This pic is the laughter you seeking*




Explanations:

* His name is JC Real… Real – Eyes = Realize which rhymes with real guy
Color contacts are fake eyes
* If you rewind the brains going out, it looking like they’re going back in
And: signed in, rewind it & minds in all rhyme… multiple syllables
* He front’s like he’s a gangsta (arms like firearms) lose two like limbs
Yoohoo is a sweet chocolate milk shake beverage… Lose two, yoohoo, choose too, execute you, boo who, and kill you all rhyme.
* Ghosts are supposed to say Boo, on the next line I said I’d kill em… make the connection…
*Go watch Seed of Chucky, his child isn’t sure if he’s a boy or a girl
* Herbs in street slang are corny mutha~fuckas… Herb is also weed though as is trees… Taken off means to rob someone, make the connection.
Btw: Confused seed, abuse trees, lose leaves, loose leaf, tooth bleed, proof please, & truth leads all rhyme multiple times.
*Matter of speaking, & laughter you seeking also rhyme multiple times.

System 02-07-06 05:34 PM

JC REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-06 05:34 PM.

dazy 02-07-06 06:05 PM

i didnt have long to do this so here it is a short drop

yo im battlin this punk bitch h.d.
ur rymes dont make sence, how u expect to be a emcee
u say ur lines r great, kiddo u dont even ryme
people get shocked when they readin ur lines, like they eating a lime*
u thinkin ur a tv channel mister high definition
u fuck with me, i'll leave u in the hospital in critical condition
im gonna win this battle all easy and nicely
u winnin this battle is like u getting a woman, highly unlikey
h.d. ur the worst mutherphukker i ever heard about
one last thing, fuck you, werd im out

* limes are sour

twenty9 02-07-06 07:36 PM

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 
JC took this simpley because he had better punches and he isnt a bitch, h.d i dont know how u are beatin me, all you do is spit garbage, everything i see that you spit is pure trash, its just all whack, dont elevate, just leave.

dazy 02-07-06 07:39 PM

lmfao ha thats funny uppin for votes people

H.D. 02-08-06 03:23 PM

hmmmm hated on by two wack MCs... hmmm let's see if I give a fuck...

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Nope

^ppin' 4 Votes

H.D. 02-08-06 05:53 PM

.................................................. hmmm this still open?

^ppin'

dazy 02-08-06 11:08 PM

uppin on this mofo it aint to hard just vote

-Substance- 02-09-06 09:55 AM

Voted For: H.D.

i'm just not gonna vote on this one sorry....checkin pollz cause both came really weak and i'm tired of seeing peeps i tell to change shit but they don't.....


Removed

-Substance- 02-09-06 09:56 AM

oh shit that was supposed to be feedback....i'll get it fixed...

dazy 02-09-06 03:09 PM

ok get it fixed

Daubs 02-09-06 04:17 PM

This was feedback posted for H.D.
 
man, wtf @ explinations longer than the verse rofl.

H.D. 02-09-06 07:40 PM

^ Seems to be needed here... since kids don't know a friggin' rhyme when it's staring them in the face


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