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-Substance- 02-07-06 05:12 PM

JC Real vs Tech Skillz
 
Battle Rules:

3-0 K.O.
6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 02-10-06 at 05:12 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

System 02-07-06 05:36 PM

Tech Skillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-06 05:36 PM.

-Substance- 02-07-06 06:01 PM

http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/13/100_6135.jpg

Lol......you should've never accepted to battle me....

Homie... i'm setting up the table just to put you in your place
So please tell me why....your nose seems to be runnin from your face!
I'll twist your neck so far right....your ears will hits your tights
If you turn around to look at me....your nose might poke my eyes!
You ain't gangsta, your skills ain't even strong enough to be weak
i'll make you system crash when i shove your face into the screen
Cause the only time you gettin hardwood....is when you havin wet dreams*
Bringin nothin but wack hits and it's this a-team ain't doin' hustles
Dude had go out with a man and beat him.....
.....since he has trouble beating his own muscle!
The way i'm burning your scripts, it's evident i'm releasing rage
Cause life's a story....so before you get close to a finish.....
...I just ripped out your last page!
It's ok if you don't show, shit...it's cool if you never even accept
See the only time you bouncin money is writting out unfunded checks!
You get left turned on but switched off when they fall asleep, like nightstands
I'll make sure your punches never land til you switch mittens.....
....for a white one on you right hand!

-Substance- 02-07-06 06:01 PM

*my explination-he tried out for hardwood classikz

System 02-07-06 06:08 PM

JC REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-07-06 06:08 PM.

dazy 02-07-06 08:58 PM

hey we having fun here, i did this shit quick
and i kno if u get ur friends to help u out and ill get their votes dq

first time u won cus i just i overestimated*
everyone sayin ur so good bitch ur overrated
hey tech i got a question, wheres ur skillz?
all u are is another fad like people getting grillz
tech skillz u are technecially inclind to never win this battle
ur scared little boy like a rattlesnake scared shakin its rattle
i knock u out tech, with only one punch
i chew u up and spit u out like u were my lunch
im the real mutherphukker JC Real,remember this victory
how tech has women? its still a unsolved mystery
tech i know ur cheatin and i can't wait till u get caught
the only time u ever have heat is when ur using icy-hot

ok there no hate and no cheatin lol

-Substance- 02-07-06 09:37 PM

so who can't vote? uppin this for votes....................

Lay-z 02-08-06 12:54 AM

Voted For: Tech Skillz

The way i'm burning your scripts, it's evident i'm releasing rage
Cause life's a story....so before you get close to a finish.....
...I just ripped out your last page!

VS

Nothing.


its pretty obivous why tech is getting my vote he actually battle with skill. and didnt just rhyme words together. he came with a serious flow, that i liked. the story line i lked and actually laughed out loud.

V/Tech

-Substance- 02-08-06 01:00 AM

thanks for the honest vote kash........uppin this for more votes...

-Substance- 02-08-06 10:07 AM

uppin this for some more votes ya'll.......................

dazy 02-08-06 04:14 PM

uppin for vote and kashmere u didnt help me at all all u sayed was nothin just nothin

H.D. 02-08-06 04:30 PM

Voted For: Tech Skillz

"first time u won cus i just i overestimated*"

I believe the word you wanted was underestimated; if you overestimated you should of beat him easily in your last battle... So your openning line not only missed but it made you look dumb too... J you really need to step up your vocab, intensity, creativity, and rhyme schemes... Right now you are not in Tech's league lyrically... Tech didn't even try in this battle... but he still had the better verse...
No hate kid, just take the crit, and improve.

Opener: Tech
Closer: JC Real (tech's was stretched litterally and creatively)
Punches: Tech (he just hit harder)
Personals: Tech (a picture says 1000 words)
Structure: JC Real
Creativity: Tech
Complexity: Tech

Vote: Tech Skillz

dazy 02-08-06 04:36 PM

yes i know anyways uppin for votes people uppin for votes

GKillaz05 02-08-06 05:17 PM

Voted For: Tech Skillz

Tech Skills - You had a good verse, you used a good flow, and you had some pretty strong personals. Good punchlines as well.

Best Line - Homie... i'm setting up the table just to put you in your place
So please tell me why....your nose seems to be runnin from your face!

Worst Line - Bringin nothin but wack hits and it's this a-team ain't doin' hustles
Dude had go out with a man and beat him.....
.....since he has trouble beating his own muscle!

JC REAL - You had an ok flow, you used some pretty weak punches and no personals or wordplay.

Best Line - first time u won cus i just i overestimated*
everyone sayin ur so good bitch ur overrated

Worst Line - tech skillz u are technecially inclind to never win this battle
ur scared little boy like a rattlesnake scared shakin its rattle

OVERALL - This was a one sided battle, with Tech gettin' the win. He used better personal. His punches were hitten harder and he used a better flow. JC you need to work on better punches. Try to think of some personals as well.

Vote - Tech Skillz

dazy 02-08-06 05:25 PM

ok uppin for votes thou im gonna lose i shoulda tried harder


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