onestepbeyond vs The Revelation
 

Battle Rules:

6-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 02-10-06 at 05:39 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Win by forfeit

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-08-06 03:10 PM.

Yeah yeah, tell them I skate... Dawg, you're losin' your wit,
Cause told me you skate too... And just can't do it for shit,
Think you're better than OSB? Ha, You must long to tell me,
But you still can't see one step............ beyond your belly,
Pun intended... I'm gonna end it... You're comin' for hunger,
But can't make any 'one yell oh' if they were colorin' numbers,
I'm punchin' with thunder...throwin' lines, one or the other,
Although when I drop bombs you'll be runnin' for cover.



Lol at how gay the last line is.

The Revelation has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-06 10:18 PM.

Haha aight, here we go.

So Kirk, ya videos don't sell, I mean look at ya dude,
The only reason ya try to eat babies is so you can get some food!
What hurt worse, the punches or the kickflip you failed on,
Cuz just like ya friends, no matter what you do you always get bailed on.
Ya lines are older then ya 'krickets', he wanted a battle for no reason,
I may not skate good, but at least I'm not considered game when it become tourist season!
Oh susana, when are you coming around them mountains to see me?
just give up man, cuz even in the depths of your mind, you couldnt 'perceive' me.
i only chose ya, cuz i knew the other people wouldnt have to fear it,
youre a crowtastrophy? nah man, thats just whenever we hear your lyrics.

blah

Woot to my wack text verse...........................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

-This is an L*F*S* Review-

aiight This shuld get good. Two skaters. two of homies. and two people I would kill in a second. Hehehe

One Step Beyond


Yeah yeah, tell them I skate... Dawg, you're losin' your wit,
Cause told me you skate too... And just can't do it for shit,

Personal number 1. Pretty good.

Think you're better than OSB? Ha, You must long to tell me,
But you still can't see one step............ beyond your belly,

Hahaha funny shit.

Pun intended... I'm gonna end it... You're comin' for hunger,
But can't make any 'one yell oh' if they were colorin' numbers,

Word.

I'm punchin' with thunder...throwin' lines, one or the other,
Although when I drop bombs you'll be runnin' for cover.

That was pretty gay.

The Revelation


So Kirk, ya videos don't sell, I mean look at ya dude,
The only reason ya try to eat babies is so you can get some food!

Hehehe Funny shit.

What hurt worse, the punches or the kickflip you failed on,
Cuz just like ya friends, no matter what you do you always get bailed on.

aiight son. Get er done.

Ya lines are older then ya 'krickets', he wanted a battle for no reason,
I may not skate good, but at least I'm not considered game when it become tourist season!

I didn't get it.Oh wait I do. Meh.

Oh susana, when are you coming around them mountains to see me?
just give up man, cuz even in the depths of your mind, you couldnt 'perceive' me.

Too se;f-glorifying...but decent.

i only chose ya, cuz i knew the other people wouldnt have to fear it,
youre a crowtastrophy? nah man, thats just whenever we hear your lyrics.

Nice closer.

Overall: This was a good battle. Lots of personals condiering you know each other and shit. Kirk gets it just cuz he had funnier punches. Though I still love you Rev. lol Oh yeah I'll piss on both of you. Word.

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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Lmfao at this shit. I laughed at both verses. You guys are so cool. Like Whoa.

Word at me upping this piece of horse shit........

Only 1-0, I still have a chance.....hhahahahaahahahaha

This was feedback posted for The Revelation
 

Lmao .

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

just checkin polls..str8 battle....................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

i have to say, both came weak but osb did come funnier and with one good metaphor. rev, prob your weakest. seen better from you. osb did come more creative and with a better structured verse....so he gets this one

I doubt you've seen better cuz this is my first text battle in months.