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okay 02-09-06 02:19 PM

Phil Benjamin vs Most Incredible
 
Battle Rules:
10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-12-06 at 02:19 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 02-09-06 02:20 PM

Most Incredible has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-06 02:20 PM.

System 02-09-06 02:25 PM

Phil Benjamin has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-09-06 02:25 PM.

Most Incredible 02-09-06 03:07 PM

g/d luck P...


Im too 'deadly, strapped for war, see'....'Punches, Metas, Multis' /
...Now sit back and watch this "pussy bleed" in every 'Cat -a- Gory' // (pussy, bleed = cat, gory)

'You cant ignore me'!...Cuz Cred's bashing his 'head in the pavement'...Sad to see, No call for 'help to save him' /
...So basically, Phil facing me is like a "Lukewarm Pyro" 'Stepping to Satan' //

The 'kid is amazing'!...Leave ur 'whole squad ancient' with 'cold hard statements' /
...To ensure u get a "shot to the face" like a 'Botox Patient" //

This 'hoes rocked, face it!'...And it's ironic, I usually dont 'squabble with these herbs' /
...See, P couldn't "look nice in RV threads" if he 'modeled their t-shirts' //

Going 'Full throttle with keys, nerd'...So its "hard to see me" like a 'ghosts erection', Now 'keep steppin' /
...Cuz i guarantee ur votes read "Z Row" like the "nose bleed section"!! // (Z-row = zero)

okay 02-10-06 12:41 PM

Dudes a free agent...but no one wants a slut
Cuz he like the Oklahoma Bombin Kids...he'll never get picked up
My hands Around ur neck an ur turnin blue
An yah Raps are only Eye popin...When im Done Chokein you
Fag u goin in the Trunk....So I can murder u wit no trace
Ima Leave Mos..Def.......when Im done Pumpin My Bass
aftermath of the razors.. Will slices ur Eyes u wont blink
Wit the blades
.....i'll show my moves A-Shaunting's when i Murder-inc
I make sure ya leash is short, Im killin geeks for sport
dudes family re-union got more rednecks than a beach resort

H.D. 02-10-06 12:59 PM

Voted For: Phil Benjamin

This was actually a perrty good battle heat came from both of you... Phil made me chuckle a few times so I'm gonna lean his way... but this was a hott battle...

Opener: Phil (made me laugh)
Closer: Phil (")
Punches: Phil (")
Personals: Phil (his openning line was the only 1 I saw)
Creativity: M.I.
Complexity: M.I.
Structure: Tie
Enjoyment: Both

Vote: Phil Benjamin

rexless 02-10-06 02:30 PM

Voted For: Most Incredible

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221483 vs twent9
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221595 vs *antic*
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221391 vs JC real
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221519 vs MC: philosopher
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215580 vs technique




Dudes a free agent...but no one wants a slut
Cuz he like the Oklahoma Bombin Kids...he'll never get picked up
nah,
My hands Around ur neck an ur turnin blue
An yah Raps are only Eye popin...When im Done Chokein you
decent
Fag u goin in the Trunk....So I can murder u wit no trace
Ima Leave Mos..Def.......when Im done Pumpin My Bass
aight,
aftermath of the razors.. Will slices ur Eyes u wont blink
Wit the blades
.....i'll show my moves A-Shaunting's when i Murder-inc
cool
I make sure ya leash is short, Im killin geeks for sport
dudes family re-union got more rednecks than a beach resort
ha nice ending i just think you should of drop more punches like this in your verse and not just the end of it..




Im too 'deadly, strapped for war, see'....'Punches, Metas, Multis' /
...Now sit back and watch this "pussy bleed" in every 'Cat -a- Gory' // (pussy, bleed = cat, gory)
nah, force word-play here wasnt feeling this
'You cant ignore me'!...Cuz Cred's bashing his 'head in the pavement'...Sad to see, No call for 'help to save him' /
...So basically, Phil facing me is like a "Lukewarm Pyro" 'Stepping to Satan' //
decent
The 'kid is amazing'!...Leave ur 'whole squad ancient' with 'cold hard statements' /
...To ensure u get a "shot to the face" like a 'Botox Patient" //
NICE
This 'hoes rocked, face it!'...And it's ironic, I usually dont 'squabble with these herbs' /
...See, P couldn't "look nice in RV threads" if he 'modeled their t-shirts' //
cool,
Going 'Full throttle with keys, nerd'...So its "hard to see me" like a 'ghosts erection', Now 'keep steppin' /
...Cuz i guarantee ur votes read "Z Row" like the "nose bleed section"!! // (Z-row = zero)
didnt get this ending sorry....

but you did have the best punch in this battle and you was more focus in attacking him close battle here i must say but i think most just edge this battle with that punch so my vote for him

*Antic* 02-13-06 08:37 PM

Voted For: Most Incredible

Vote- Most Incredible

MI, you straight quality with the text battles...this one was pretty fuckin close....here's how I saw it.

Flow- Tie. Both catz had their styles, and I liked how each one structured their verse. I couldn't pick one over the other.

Punches- MI. He came more complex, straight up. His punches hit harder, and were clever. Phil's first bar was fuckin' viscious, but somewhere in the middle of his verse he lost the heat, I thought.

Personals- None.

Multis- Close, but MI had some more multis, and they were cleaner than Phil's.

Wordplay- MI, his wordplay totally aided his punches. Phil didn't really have any wordplay.

Good close battle. I thought MI edged by Phil with harder, consistent punches and decent wordplay. Both catz are good, keep workin'.

If you could RTF and drop some votes on Antic vs. JC Real and Antic vs. Rexless, that'd be cool.

~1~

The-King 02-13-06 08:43 PM

Voted For: Most Incredible

i give this one to Most Incredible cause some of his lines were arright as most of the other guy had pretty whack lines


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