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Dervla 02-10-06 03:54 PM

§ÄþþØ vs Po It.
 
Battle Rules:

Topic- Irreversible
30-40 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

G-Luck.



Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 02-14-06 at 03:54 PM

Must drop verse in 5760 minutes after check in.

System 02-11-06 07:07 PM

Po It. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-06 07:07 PM.

System 02-12-06 10:00 PM

§ÄþþØ has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-06 10:00 PM.

Po It. 02-15-06 02:41 PM

IRREVERSIBLE
miss hallem a. flora, a title reflectin aurora.
your regular hollywood chick - a fiend of sephora.
the realist connection reporter w/ a rare skin disease.
a complexion of horror, year round tears in her knees.
hair darker then sees - candy red lips chap in autumn.
blame the world, she led a childhood mocked in solumn.
surgical scars from back to bottom - usually long.
the stylists attacked'r often, at the beauty salon.
she put on fifteen - body fell into a brew n pill feeble.
never blessed w/ euphora, twenty-two & still single.
accustomed to feel evil - tears like a rain tinted window.
hard to sleep when its damp on both sides of the pillow.
life is depressin & hallem was born w/ extra baggage.
the majority want perfection, shed be blessed as average.
the illness made her bleed constant - like a pessimist.
fed up w/ this sorrow, the wreck returned to a specialist.
"i could perscribe you cigarettes", the doctor laughed.
said it'll reduce ten years - just hope for a heart attack.
headed home w/ a clouded temple - echoing novo hallem.
crippled minded, she lost herself in her family photo album.
she crossed a portrait, reminding her of laughter & worth.
a black & white photo, of her sister & pastor at church.
her sister - jainey passed away just six years after birth.
hallem was jealous, jainey wasnt trapped on this earth.
when it all fell down, she was done fighting off them foes.
hallem disposed - faith in miracles & took a garden hose.
she put on her oddest clothes - symbolizin life's piracy.
climbed in her car & closed - the door shut for privacy.
hallem sobbed, relfectin the past in foreign mirage.
mysterious voices abroad - blessin her death bed garage.
the pain of massage - she burries hope in her thoughts.
frail brain a collage - the hose from window to exhaust.
the gas emerged, she choked - several gags at first.
she thought of black n hurse & the chapters after hers.
realized death cant reverse - nor can it cover will.
w/ hands removed, she breathed til her lungs were filled.
she was young & still - perceived life as satan's technique.
her body hated, she felt strife eight days of the week.
the illness, limited her search for her favorite things.
the irriversible, renamed'r soul & became'r angel wings.

Dervla 02-15-06 03:57 PM

Actually wrote this one to a beat, enjoy.



I walk on the steps, going into another realm,
wings of the angels acting as a elm,
going in as a helm, and I'm not feeling overwhelm,
nor grim, my head is high like a beautiful rose stem,
that's until the wheather changed to a disaster,
my heart got hit hard into a plaster, then I reacted
...OMG is there a pastor?
Scripted lines from my palms, started changing,
I started panicking, then with clear liquid, I
...Started washing.
A crucifix sign laying there right infront of me,
feeling so steemed, what could this feeling be?
I need this go away, decay, and that's wen I
...Press Play.

Sitting in my room, under the moon, hearing blues,
bearing in this sad tune, my heart been badly bruised,
ripples of the guitar sending waves into my badger mind,
where the place "self" I can't find, call me Ray, I'm blind,
heart of drum comes into play and it sounds so familiar,
It eases my pain, and it clears up my brain, this is a killer,
tip tap, that must be the rain, the quiet ones runs down my
cheeks, heart throbbing in agony when everytime I *sigh*
I'm drowning in my own ocean, pores open with salty sweats,
I'm fend to lose my breath, if I don't swim myself out of this.
My mind blurry like looking into a screene with full of "rice",
I'm swimming hard as I can, but my arms are weak
..It looks like I'm fend to lose the fight,
sharks coming after me, but what's the use, I have no life,
so I weaken myself and drown, no accident, for a purpose,
I'm going to hell anyways, why waste space on this surface,
where it's going to hurt worse, the exposure is going to sting,
the big bold letters in the article going to put me in eternity sleep
so I leave u with this tape, "don't worry" and a loud bang,
now everything done changed, lips are sealed once again,
what i've done can't be reverse, one mistake and my life is over.


True story here, a man beat his girlfriend to death, he didn't mean to, he wanted to teach her a lesson and not cheat on him again, after that the cops said after a 3 hour hold up, standing infront of the apartment when all of a sudden a loud bang erupted. He killed himself. The cops found a tape that says "Don't worry", a instrumental, which the cops believed, he made.

Key... 02-17-06 02:19 AM

This was feedback posted for §ÄþþØ
 
Just checkin the score...nice drop both ............................................

Germ 02-19-06 08:37 PM

This was feedback posted for Po It.
 
going in as a helm? wtf hahahahhahahahahhahahaha

good shit po

Critic 02-20-06 09:00 AM

This was feedback posted for §ÄþþØ
 
Just droping feed this was a real dope battle by
both,...

Lola u come well nice ma, feeling the flow and the
emotions,.. imaginery was really good..

Very solid drop.

Po It. come dope too.

Stay up both

1~

B.I.G. 03-13-06 08:20 PM

Voted For: Po It.

this shit is fucking funny.... man

this is jus too good to be true

My criteria-
vocab ¿ = 9 / Po It = 10
flow ¿ = 10 / Po It = 10
creativity ¿ = 10/ Po It = 10
structure ¿ = 9.5 / Po It = 10
hot-bars ¿ = III / Po It = VI

Winner: Po It

Sik Wit It 03-27-06 11:02 AM

This was feedback posted for Po It.
 
Topical battles never get voted on.. don't try it anymore people.

Po It. 03-27-06 03:47 PM

thanks for the advice, but all i do is topical.
and the league is dead, and the tourney
is wack...thats it. so ppl better start votin.


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