Intermental - Young n' Opressed
 

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This is the outro of my mixtape: Soul Rebel Volume 1

"Young n' Opressed"

A Quite emotional song...so means alot to me this feed....ill rtf..1

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221763

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220364

upppin...............

lol @ you usin that beat with the funky sample at the start


sample sucks


I guess the extreme opposite of my "my name is tha q" sample


beat is okay though


personal lyrics,,,was feeling them

However, don't cry "foul" too much dawg...do you have it THAT bad, really?


flow is cool

all the elements are there

not a bad track


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The beat is pretty good, nice and mellow with a great vibe to it. first thing I noticed was that you have a decent sound but your voice blends to much. Idk what the problem is but it's hard to understand you, it's not your pronounceation but it's something else. turn the vocal volume up a bit maybe I'm not sure man. your verses are ok but like when you do adlibs and shit thats when it's effected most, you should turn down the adlib volume a bit or give them a different effect to amke them sound different. your lyrics were very good, and the storyline was very to the point. the hook was decent, I thought it coulda been better but it's alright.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221910

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Aight

You Shoulda Cut Out The Sample Though

Beats Dope Though


Werd to you using my hook settings:)

Feeling the hook,emotional

FLows dope,delivery koo...suits the track,feeling your emotion in it...the lyrics are good,you suit this beat,you blend in to it,your presence is koo,its laid back a lil more,
i like how u experimenting with the hook settings..works well,liking the outro echo

Good Outro!

Keep Up Fam