Trickle - Limited Edition & Paranoid (I re did my verse)
 

Yea i re did my verse instead of doing dubs I did a few adlibs.

www.soundclick.com/paranoid05

intro: Para
verse1: LE
hook: LE
verse2: Para

Yea leave feed and links as well if you want, I'd gladly hit your tracks wit feed.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221889
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221889

While listenin to the intro, I kept thinking "Get to the dang rappin.


LE...I like your breath control

But, this beat sounds grainy.


LE's flow fits this beat nicely


very grimey sounding lyrics combined with delivery...I like it


Hook sound trendy and hip...I like it


Para...your vocals need more highs and less lows...either that or just a mic with greater range for your voice

Ur flow fits the beat, but it sounds a tad robotic

Like..."I----Am----Going-----To-----Flow-----To----The----Beat

Be fluid with it


this was a hot collab






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Thanks for the feed...

This wasn't with my Condensor Mic by the way.

Up.

uppin...............

I see you re-incarnated LE to get on the track llol..intro was funy..lol..LE feelin the flow, lyrics are hot, real hot, delivery is hot....hook is scaring me lol....but its nice...Paranoid ure workin on the emotion, im likin that, however still robotic, ure gettin there....lyrics are nice..flow is kool jus work on that robotic shit...keep it up

okay.....this beat is weak son.....Le...comes in ya quality is lacking...vocals sound hollow an scratchy......flow is koo but quality is killing it....delivery was general LE delivery coulda took a down a bit it was a bit excessive for beat...hook awww quality made it horrid son..no hate but I jus cant enjoy it due to quality....paranoid u was exact opposite ya delivery didn't give enuff....it was boring to be honest...if u had fluctuated ya voice jus a tad in the right spots it woulda made all the difference howeve rya flow has improved def wasn't bad here...keep it up yall...this wasn't too bad quality an its general lack of polish hurt this track but wit those excused it was decent....be ez.........1

i dont like the beat.....

LE comes in....nice flow...got better since last time i listened to u...good job on that...delivery was coo.....quality was ehhh....i think with your new mic youll be straight....

Para...work on making the flow more smooth...u kinda hesitate with your words...kinda sounds robotic in a couple spots...overall it has improved though.....delivery could be upped a lil bit....but that has also gotten better...i can see that your def. elevating....

hook was ok...no complaints with it

feed used 2/27 "Intermental Diss"

^thanks for feed....uppin

uppin again.