New Gospel Jam: "Time to be a man"...holla atcha boyeeeee
 

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Beat: So Real Ent.(West Coast Flava!)
Hook: Written and performed by Q

Verses 1 & 2: Q


Intro sample: Ebircs *I appreciate it homie*



Concept: Temptation faces everyone. But, how many of us are willing to stand up and do what's right in God's eyes. The theme is standing up for God amid adversity and trials.



Holla


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221910
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221949

Hmm, the beat isn't quite what I expected, but it started to fit better as the song went on. Flow seems good, lyrics are good, singing is eh, but overall I would probably bump this if the singing was fixed. Singin isn't bad, but it isn't great, so maybe talk to a girl that can sing and see if she will sing the hook, other than that, this track is solid.

I'm liking this one. You actually sound like you spit the whole thing with a smile on your face....lol. That's good :thumbup:™

Keep the faith man....

no doubt...appreciate the feed

as for the singing, I pushed my limits/range on this one to see if I could pull it off. After reviewing it, I was satisfied because I did the best I could on it.


I wouldn't get a female to sing it if I were dissatisfied. I'd just rearrange it.


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aww shit...some singing shit...fun-kay type....nice flow..cross walk line nice,some nice multis cuttin here b4 the trumpet line...singing b killin it..nice track man !! keep it up

feed used 2/17 "Gun FUEYYYYYYY"

Okkk

Beats Dope

Feeling It

Singing

Im Feeling your singing more now

Its works well on this

flows dope,lol@crip walk line...flows crazy for real,feeling your emotion,dope lyrics man....presence is dope,your deliverys getting much better...

Hook again,dopeness

This verse,the flow stands out more,nah mean,lyrics are better,almostlike u hypin it
to get beter n better


Hook...........

Overall:Good Track

9/10

preciate da feed fellas







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eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer up