Take It To The Max Man.. OH MY GOD
 

Aight lil somthin else I figured i'd give ya'll a taste of ... provin myslef lyrically and still flowin like a river

peep da joint take it to the max man

www.soundclick.com/jsummers

also peep

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222268

left feed on Chiefs track and shaun kahn or some shit
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2658421
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221761

checked

biggity bump trix dont sleep....

aight i'm peepin it out right now

Beat-the beat sounds alright,its alright,not the best i heard - 7.8/10

Flow-Your flow is pretty good....you got somthin nice goin here-8/10

Pressense-Your pressense wasn't that great just a lil more too really draw some more attention too the people-7/10

Emotion-Your emotion was good but still,still without pressense it doesn't sound right-8/10

overall-overall this was aight,nothin i'd bump on a reg. basis you know..your voice is unique in a way...that second guy was alright..you mos. def. outshined him......keep it comin saran-7.6/10

Feed used 2/15/06

yo thanx upppp this shit...................................

this is pretty ill man...once again you got that grimey kinda delivery..on that southern tip.....beat is nice as well...i'm also feeling that

you guys meshed good on this.....the qualiy wasn't that bad either....deserves second listen

beat is decent.....drums is tight but supporting instruments suck but drums make it decent......first verse....flow is basic...an its rushed in spots......delivery its a tad lackluster u coulda put more feeling in it.......hook....it had been mixed better to be wetter it woulda been stronger but it was a good idea u jus didn't execute it properly...second verse.....flow woulda been better if u had put the right emotion in it...i t was singy in beginning but emotion was monotone...aww if he had put right emotion that verse woulda been nasty......third verse....flow was decent breathe control hurt it...couple lines u ran outta air an didn't drag out words enuff to make it hot.....addlibs was a tad too loud an u could used more.....a stop an go flow wit addlibs woulda really worked on this beat......but not bad...4th verse.........this dude's flow is real basic......an the delivery is blan if u gon come wit this simple flow u gotta make up for it in rhythms an delivery an dude aint make up for it.....track was a good idea...but yall jus lacked polish to really make this track what it coulda been but in time yall will grow this shows real promise...jus keep at it......1

k thanx trip up

flow is aiight

quality is deece

emotion is good

ill like, always room for improvement of course, everyone knows that, even me.. LMFAO jp

peace homie, keep dropin

feed used 2/25 "Dont Play This Game"

of course thanx man...........................................

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listening


beat.... reminds me of some Friday the 13th type ish...

1st verse: Never peeped you b4... but... for the first track... you show that you got the basics down... now you gotta master it... and the thing you doin wit your voice... i dont mean the effect on "YEA" ... i mean... that you sound like your spittin to hard..
and you gotta work on your content... keep spittin but... work on delivery... being smooth... you know... and feel what you sayin...




2nd verse: Some places you sounded like you were tryin to be 50...


3rd verse: Did i hear some Eminem Biting goin on here??? 20 below freezing... no reason... flavor wit no seasoining???

4thverse: Prolly best verse on here.... showed a lil more who you are as an artist... i didnt notice as much swagger jackin as in the first 3 minets of the track...


Greasy mayne......... Holla at a pimp...you got a ill Southern thing goin on...

summers... keep droppin and work on original lyrics...

feed used 2/27 "Mushu Da Pimp"

(i say bigs verse i'm only biggen up my brother) - jay z..

fucks wit it its a dope line