Hop On In*new ish from PT*
 

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Hop On In

i pulled out one of my old mics and was like i'm bored lets record a track.....well anyways...if you leave feed i will leave feed back..


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I actually really like this beat... piano and all... really laid back type feel... and you came over the top of it with a pretty relaxing flow... liked that aspect of this... not bad... the hook was aight, didn't feeling the singing too much though... flow was pretty on point... lyrically wasn't really that blaze... "on top of the vaccum" <~~~ yay that had me like why would you say that? anyway over all this was cool for like a lil laid back jon to mellow things back out on a demo/mixtape

RTF Last Breath

yeah thanks for the feed

this is the incomplete track i'm waiting for our backround singer too get on this...hes gonna sing it up really good make it sound 2000 times better

lol aight rey i got you right now fam

this is nice, i'm really feeling the beat, think i can get it too use it? i don't like the echo effect at some points, but it is nice....good job, nice flow...some parts your voice did seem like you were signing under your breath...rtf in my open mic, the shadow behind me son

Ok i got you man...

but yeah ill let you use the beat

ok hit me up on aim or msn....thanks past

aight aight aight...

aight you got the right to talk shit... but be easy shit aint fiya

good beat i guess i really aint in to know 1991 ll cool j type shit you know that lovin shit but its decent for that comin in clear delivery is dope too good flow and you writen lyrics like the rest of da cats on this site.. but still dog 7/10

stay up -1

feed used 2/16 "!!!They Fuckin Comin For Ya!!! "

word i feel you man

bad mic i got right now it'll be better in a week or so

thanks for the feed

~1

its iiiight. i would give it a 7/10. hook is str8. we should battle in doin a love track. that'd b fun. but it's iight. 1 P.S. - As always, fuck dem PSA niggas! 1

what beat is dat? if it's an original beat i'd wanna fucc wit it. let me know. I'll turn dat into a hit quicc. 1

beat:8...oo..datz dat slow ish..oooweee
flow:8.5
hook:8
enjoyment:8

man i liked it man......dis dat song for da ladiez fa sho and i was really feelin' it....u culd get sum chickz wit dis one..lol

alright i'm upppin

yeah..uppin..again