Fin(The End!!)....first track u hearin from Yung Miss!!!
 

hey watz good yall???!!!.......itz yung miss!! i'm new to the forum but im playin on takin it ova u feel!!!...lol.....but yea...dis one of da first all rap no singin songz i did since i got my mic..yes ya girl singz......if u wanna hear all my trackz...check me out at soundclick.com/connieclark....but if u just wanna hear fin so i can get sum feed..the linkz r below!! enjoy

Fin ( The End)
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3441152&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3441152&q=hi

well you gotta drop links on songs you've left feed on before you post in here

Yo no shit i heard this track like a week ago just searchin soundclick shit dope man

fasho whole track straight gangsta..
flow 8/10
vocal qual 7/10
lyrical ability 8/10

shit was hard ma keep it up peep www.soundclick.com/jsummers or check da link in da sig

oh my bad..here r my linkz!!

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2660379
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2660386

Hmm i took a listen..this aint too bad girl....your pretty good..your quality is horrid tho thats ur main problem boost up ur emotion and you'll be pretty good i enjoyed this yeah it was like one of the tracks u show ur friends and they like 'cool' soo yeah keep it comin

can your return the fav. too the song in my sig

yo ya flow is strate, ya delivery could be upped, like Past Tense said show a lil more emotion.......and ya quality could be upped a bit, but otha than that it wuz a nice track....keep droppen..

pz

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wow... work on delivery... and flow... you'll be pretty sick...

Was feelin the beat.. lyrics were coo. Straight shit.

You got some pretty good potential.....but the flow on this could have been better. Also, your delivery was kinda monotone. Try using some inflection here and there.....this wasn't a bad track though.....keep it up :thumbup:™

im feelin your hype energy..your voice kinda reminds me of lady fiya's ...nice quality clearly spitting i fux with dat..you got nice lines....great metaphores and similies...the beat is dope always wanted to spit to it ...you gotta nice rap voice i must say...I enjoyed your lines...although u used the word lunches.. lol but thats aight!...i see u got mad potential from this track ...i can hear you gettin nasty on a more serious track keep it up

datz watz good...thanx fa da feed...itz greatly appreciated...especially from the great MADAM MERK!!!....chea!!...^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^