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John.Hendricks vs rexless
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no biting or recycling 3-0 KO 2 day deadline . . g'luck Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 02-18-06 at 07:46 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
rexless has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-18-06 06:48 PM.
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John.Hendricks has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-18-06 06:50 PM.
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I feel the vibration of you shivering as this chapter arrives
you hold so much unimportance.... ............................................your names not even capitalized Stop acting surprised, ya not dope, you the wackest with rhymes I'll start "telling jokes while killing you" .. .................................................. ..just so RV can "laugh as ya die" Heres ya last of goodbyes, regret the day u picked up a pencil, boy cause your drops have been unappreciated ever since you joined I rip through loins, I can easily tell that your weak through text and I aint talking about "you being more active"... ....................................when I say RV wants to "see you Less" Just proceed to rest, u won 5 battles, thought ya rappin was great then Tech Skillz up and ko'd you, which put you back in your place This cats a disgrace, how you impress when spittin, dude when your only reason for battling Tech... ...........was cause you were too wack for him to let you in his crew ^^^http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221157 Dont ever text again, ya through...just face it, ya bars wack as shit ...you'll see an "ambulance come for rex(wrecks)"... .................................................. .................................like "car accidents" You'll get scarred bad with scripts, u need to top writing shit, Rexless you even admitted you were no good.... ........................................so you asked the whole site for some lessons ^^^http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215576 Advice and suggestions, on how to be a vet, somewhat a head emcee cause you was so desperate to become something you'll never be I'm cutting ya brevity, in text, your not hard, this herb is nothing, see cause RV "dont want to see much of rex".... .................................................. ..............like "car insurance companies" aww, over already....oh well... uppin for rex... |
sorry since i was in the mode to spit i just drop a freestyle noting pre-written or focused just a quick drop peep this
Drink a beer to this, cypherists get defective wrists you can't "spit-rap", so my only compatition must be lisps you the only one who actually horny from all these cocks Hollow point gear, leave this kid wearing warning shots u beat in me, the odds against u like playing vegas' slots even if you were the pusher you couldnt blaze the spot leaved him seared with his face smeared till the morning drops I quit porno, cause bitches like you alway get fucked with a boring plot teenage titty banging whores with strap-ons and horny twats fuck pushin i pull it, and zoomed a bullet through it....... your casket, as your flower ass holds a tullip this aint a game but " I DE-CLAIR-War, spitting out violent flares, u aint a thug the only projects u see are at a science fair BITCH i got to go something quick EEHHHH.... |
uppin for votes ..
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.. uppin fa votes..this been up for a grip ..
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upping for votes........................
i will RTF..... |
This was feedback posted for rexless
your shits all over the place and hard to read. maybe if you explain some things it'll make a bit more since but your flow a bit off. Your lines are way too stretched out and why would you freestyle about nothing when your in a battle homie. that shit dont make sence, there a place for that in this battle nigga.
over all ...4/10 |
Voted For: John.Hendricks
without question deapest flows has this...........he had punches....personals....wordply........granted, i didn't feel any of them connected very well accept for the wordplay on his name was okay......overall...i would give your verse a 6/10........and rexless...because of the fact that it just didn't show a whole lot of understanding of battling....i'd give yours about a 3/10....one thing that would help you a lot, is work on punches, flow, and rhyme scheme...rhyme scheme is huge...if you get that down..the rest will sort of come |
Voted For: rexless
Drink a beer to this, cypherists get defective wrists you can't "spit-rap", so my only compatition must be lisps you the only one who actually horny from all these cocks ^^^^^^^^^^ lol haha good opener hre son... u sunnd ths fool tha otha fella??... fuck work on punches u fucktard.. rexless... good shit.. had dope flow... good punches.. real good work here... better ..... structure.. had a lot of hard hittin punches wit tha opener... good stuff |
This was feedback posted for rexless
hmm, I'm pretty sure that projects you see are at a science fair line is bitten iunno
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upp'in for more votes to end this crap.............
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Voted For: John.Hendricks
John gets my vote...He had a good opening which was better than rex's...John's second line was pretty decent too. His personals hit more and a better than rex's... When it came down to the closing...rex took this one here...Kinda made me laugh too. Both had some word play but John's was better so that helped out a little bit too. Overall the vote goes to John Hendricks on this battle. |
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