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FINAL VERSION!! HOP ON In ft. Re'Von
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3529865
its fire baby you leave feed i leave feed GET AT IT -- Links ===== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222812 ======== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222546 checked |
wow actually pretty nice...i can hear this bein played on da radio..but take that as a compliment the girl singing is dope she gotta nice voice..your flow was nice delivery was killin this IN a good way tho..im feeling the lyrics as well tho..u did the beat justice...i like the chorus as well...i dont wanna play around i wanna lay you down lemme show u things u neva done girl just hop on in ..yeah very catch chorus feeling the end when ya both repeated the hop on in part that was a nice addition .. i appreciated the feedback and your song is great no B.S. good listen...Uppin for more Replies
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thanks a lot ma :)
but the singer is a guy |
Aght
Past: Good Lucks,Nice Flow,Deliberys Dope For This Track,Lyrics Are Nice For This,Its Original Lyrics For The Topic,Im Suprised,Presence Is Dope,Suits It,Liking The Quality:) Damn,Really Good Shit..Feeling Your Presence Hook........Dope! That Girls Dooope!!! Your Second Verse Is Nice,Flows Switched Up,Deliverys Koo,Lol@Bake A Cake Line,Lyrics Are Straight,Like The End Of Your Verses With The Lil Talking Hook.......... LMFAO I Thougth It Was A Girl:( Lol Well Hes Dope! Good Track,Keep Up! |
word up soon as you got somthing you know what too do just send me the link
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id say before you sent it into the radio...line up your stacks at the beginning a lil bit better....take a lil reverb off....
and at the beginning when your flow...when your at the point when your like..."undressed and your ready"...when you drag em off past the snare drums...make it a lil more smooth...its may be the stacks...im not sure....but it seems like u rush those a lil bit.... good track though....presence and delivery and everything is nice....its a good song...def. could be heard on the radio...id say send it in |
word thanks a lot man
just like i said too unf once you got links send me those |
aight i'm uppin on this
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Uppin Again Come On Peeps Dont Sleep On This
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Uppin This Again Come One!!!
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Listening...
Beat is nice... The singer is a guy..? o_O Sounds like a chick man. But it sounds good. Flow is pretty nice. Hook is nice. Quality is ill. Good shit, keep it up. |
aiight the beat sounds like U compressed the f**k outta it..um delivery is average lyrics r average emotion could be slightly better um flow could be upped riding tha beat is fine presence needs work emotion needs work production could be better
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aight good looks i'm uppin
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alright i'll do it now
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