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E-Gangsta (Definition of Raverse)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222735
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222754 E-Gangta (Definition of Rapverse) Put theese jokes to sleep www.soundclick.com/jsummers |
fuckin kidding up this bitch.
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heh.....i hope it diddnt seriously take you 25 mins to write that bro.....i've herd yahoo freestyles with better punch lines...u had like 5-6 actual punches in a FOUR min song...and their ALL week...BUMPED LIKE SPEAKERS?? u GOTS to b joking....that 1000 $$ mic makes u sound clear as shit...maby u should get a cheeper one so we THINK your saying somethign worth listning to.......but yea..beats nice...for a dance song.....and yea...flows decent..most the time..tho u pack to many words in a bar..and ur verse structure is awfull....and u have no vocab....ummmm....yea so rewrite this one...
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beats dope...intros ok so far...aiight vocals r too low in the mix U sound mad young ...but yeah ya flows really nice U can ride a beat well ...lyrics could be better lyrical word play could be upped emotions is good though I dunno if U trying to sound liek a tough guy/thug but that really wont work with your voice and image no offence....but yeah spit on a underground beat man U will be fine...nice drop
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i'm 19 thats how i sound..cho i know thats the feed you'd give me its alright man you'll get better dont get mad
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not talkin hate bro..is all fact.....also umm...your "19" yea..well hate to tell ya but...ur voice dont change no deeper after that ......till u get like 50-60 then u jus sound like a old head LOL
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ohhh is this what you had to cho wang and Q or whatever......
i like the beat.....i like the quality the best.....umm...i like your delivery...shit is ill as fuck... lyrics arn't hard hitting..but nonetheless the delivery makes up for that....i like this man....you got at whoever it is you wanted this out to...... |
k bitches on the up and up tell i'm done with theese kids.. be on the look out comin this week new track by j.summers- called BROKEBACK RAPPER
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up up up up c
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