Best MC on RV
 

LMFAO.....

i think you should go with uhh......fucking...biggest joke on rv...

u suck

thanx...............haahaha............just wanted to get sum attention hahaha.....theres always time for elevation lol

^^ You Ar Sofa King Stupid...

ya suck..and you've made 40 songs and you still aint elavated..i've only made about 25-27 songs total since i've started rapping......lol this is sad

LOL..YA'LL r mean...............

i dont care if there mean..........there honest which i like......i mean theres some dickheads that prolly just write instead of rhyme so fuck those kids cuz they cant do what any of us do....i think i lack in quality cuz i got acoustica mixcraft adn a 20 dolla mic but im poor...... and i have elevated ive elevated on emotion flow lyrics complexity etc.....i know mad dukes tell me on other sites and in life........and it really dosent matter what people say what you beleive is your truth you speak and distribute it to folks.....i wouldnt expect people to like my music its about being ugly depression being a step child having sadsitic thoughts growing up in the country where the town is very racists....shit is very complex from what other mcs are doing which is basically fast food rap disposable arts...fuckin puttin a record out wit same hook another artist did and just adding a lame verse.....anyway upping.....and if i suck at rapping its proven i can write my ass off so i shall be a songwriter

any upping for constructive feed

iight since you want constructive feed ill leave it...and btw sayin yur the best aint the best way to get attention on this site...your voice is much better rappin then it is talkin lmao...your flow and delivery needs wrok, make your verses fit the beats...use more emotion in your songs (im listenin to to my father)...add soem libs andshit to your verses they sound empty...and make your chorus's stand otu more from your verses, cuz i could barely tell it was a chorus...lyrics are pretty good....but yea elevate....this aint terrible but wasnt good...but yea youll elevate...

cood ya leave feed on my thread too
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222977

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