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Mad dog diss
Nothin serious, i recorded this in a rush like 1 month or two back when we were gonna battle.
It never happened so: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3298956 Its a choppy flow, but any feedback is appreciated. |
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Beat is dope...
Not a bad diss overall. lyrically could of been a bit better in places, but you said the flow was choppy, I didnt think it was choppy to be honest... I kinda liked the flow for a white nigga :thumbup: stay up Daubs. |
i don't know.... it just didn't grab me.... didn't sound hard enough.... honestly, i didn't even listen to the whole thing.... ya need to come out stronger in the beginning... grab the listeners attention... make them feel like "yo, this dude bout to let kid have it!!!".... i didn't feel that.... put more energy and conviction into a battle track... this one sounded like you weren't sure if ya could beat him or not...just my opinion though....
to break it down for ya... i'd say ya need to be momre hungry on da mic.... like.... starving and near death and this is gonna be the last thing that the comp is gonna hear from ya.... you want them to remember this shyt for the rest of they natural born days... ya wanna make it so that a nuk nuk can't even respond.....werd.... stay up, though.... i know you've done better than this |
Thanks man, il be sure to do that next time.
Like i said im elevating so any tips il be sure to use. safe. |
As Jimmy once said to the bloods and crips in south park
"I mean...come on" i don't know whether to retaliate or laugh...i'll do both ;) |
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