Have You Ever...New Song For The New Album...
 

this is the first cut of this song....so be harsh on it....i want as much feedback as possible cuz ive prolly gotta change it alot before its album worthy....so as much help as possible please....


Have You Ever - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3609296


links -
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223668
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223812

thanks

comon just a lil feed?

Alrigh i'm peepin now

hmmmm

i have no idea why you were hatin on spul and tizz.....cuz there song sounds way better then this song does....ur flows on point but you have no emotion of delivery..sounds really boring..up that..beats played out....this song aint album worthy sorry cuz....up a lil more

beat:i luv beatz like dis........9
flow:man...i luv ya flowz man......dey on point......8.5...just b a little louder and up ya emotion....
hook:lackin a hook but i guess da sample makez up for it and itz still hot....8.5
enjoyment:9...i like dis joint mah dude.....real talk...

Man I dont know why you give out so much hate when this aint even average but its better than most newbs, you have a natural flow but thats just it...work on the delivery and presence, and emotion, youre flows too robotic IMo..there u go

yea I'm definately feelin this beat...even tho samples are startin to sound the same now...but its all good tho..ya flow was on point, delivery couldve been alot better tho, couldve had more emotion to make ya lyrics more interesting...Ya vocal volume could be higher too...overall this track was ok.

Can you RTF please thanks
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223857

first off....i dont "hate" on those people...i just give feed on what they need to work on....i know i dont have it all down, n i dont claim too... i know i need to work on bunch of shit hence why i put shit up on here to get feedback on what needs to be worked on