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sxrs3780 03-08-06 08:15 PM

money
 
i got that paper like the bags them dudes can't mess with me they some fags like the trash bag i'm always glad leave them dudes at home looking sad i got that green cause i'm always on da seen this year i'm goning to shut dudes down when i'm on the magzine i'm only a teen that's makeing a move if u don't believe me i'm goning to prove i'm gon to show it in yo face i make that noise when i got then toys u still playing with then little boys

Payn 03-08-06 10:04 PM

u need 2 separate ya lines & put it in a stanza & if ur not sure wut i'm talkin bout

like diz here:

watch out here comes a fuccin goon
ur more animated den characters on cartoons



but othawise u also need 2 add multies a few punchlines so it'll liven ya text up more deuce

Infamous22 03-08-06 11:38 PM

i've seen n breed ur style/but i put money on it lil nigga u no where near buck wyld/a tru ghetto child raised n made from da streets/a prodogized street souldja inheriting murda beef/so be-4 u get sheik nigga sit back n think/be-4 ur wig get bushed back be-4 ur eyelids can blink!!

Paper View 03-09-06 03:04 AM

Whackness sorry up your vocab

CORY DA REALIST 03-09-06 10:29 AM

u n33d 2 chang da formatrion n use bigg3r words


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