day after day....not my best so let me have it.....
 

lookin for good feed to improve this song...cuz i want it on the album...but right now its not worthy.....

DAy after DAY - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3616787


linkssss -
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3616787
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223650

uppin....lookin for ways to make this bettter.....alot better

i like this..the beat is cooll...

good lyrics and flow and what not.....nice quality as well..what you use?

overall i like this man......chorus could be more dynamic...but dope track...

pretty good...good beat...good lyrics....pretty emotional...got a lil eminem feel to it...7/10

Sorry, I don't feel like goin through sound click right now, fuckin slow shit. But I'ma tell you that you shouldn't ever think your shits weak. Always know you came out hot everytime, then your shit will come out tight.

-Paranoid

Beat is aight. Ya quality could be a little bit better, sounds like ya vocals need to be turned up a little. Delivery fits the mood that the beat creates. Pronunciation could be a little better, towards the beginning you said something I couldn't make out. Flow's aight. Could be better in some places. Yea your vocals need to be turned up in some places, the beat turns up but ya voice/delivery doesn't increase. Good shit

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