Dark Eclipse vs Nucentz
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

First to 5 wins

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-14-06 at 12:33 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Dark Eclipse has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-06 12:34 AM.

You got 3 days to drop but I seriously hope it doesn't take you more than 30 minutes. I'm droppin now.

You the slave, I'm the whip, strikin ya ass
Left foot's on the ground, the right's in ya ass
Got a feelin he don't feel like beefin' today
He a puzzle piece - I'll put the piece in it's place
Got 'em on the run, but I'm not needin' to chase
Reel like a fisher, you I'm eatin' today
Got no dick riders? Damn, where yo crew went
They left his ass, when they heard he had no Nucentz
Climb to the highest montain, still can't top me
Sorry to smash ya, should've told you I squash beef

Sorry nucentz didn't mean to murder you so badly you sure you wanna drop lol

Nucentz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-06 06:34 AM.

my style is generic urs is authentic made i roll like a renegade i spit firey rhymes out of my firey vains il hand you by your neck mic check one two you see how i do it you will learn some day now u gota be truthful n never tel a lie cause at the end of this ur gonna die listen to my hi fi dropin out the beats yal better get up off ya seats cause nucentz is rhymen yo he s gotta pearl dimond he a a lyerical gangsta poppin out his shit he l rip you in two yo i gota go do a poo.

yo dawg u didnt murder me i murder ur ass lol yo liken yo rhyme peace

This was feedback posted for Dark Eclipse
 

Hmm this was a pretty weak battle..

Nucentz-Those first lines were def. biten from Eminem offa that freestyle battle with xzibit..Thats out..Structure was on point..Vocab was decent..No real punches at all..Multis were coo and metas were cool..Finisher was decent..

Overall-Up your verse with better punches and wordplay..

D.E-Beginning was on point, structure was on point..Vocab was okay, punches were decent..Multis were coo' and metas were alright..Finisher was decent..

Overall-Work on punches and wordplay

VOTE-This was a real weak battle but I have to give it to Eclipse because his punches attempted to hit his oponent more..No hate Im just saying my opinion..props to both emcees and elevate LOTS

~1~

Voted For: Dark Eclipse

BoTh verses were equally garbage, no excitement....basic rhymes, with a basic flow, with a basic ass HELL NO! LOL...

But....overall dark structure

was hella bettta, even thought u necessarily didnt change ya rhymes, u rhymed of 3 words really..

NuCents

...ya Shyt was NonSense....do some cyphers, and develop a valid structure..and actually rhyme...thats the whole point isn' it? ugh..

Voted For: Dark Eclipse

dark winz coz da utha guy bitten slim shady and darkz verse wuz betta anyway

This was feedback posted for Nucentz
 

yo what the hell was you thinkin??? thats not original at all...your first line was off of 8 mile and the rest was just wack