Music Is War ft. Jay 286
 

yerrr yerr, me and jay collabed on this hot track. i dont actually like my verse for this that much, but jay rips it lolll. check it out yo:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=504919

:thumbup:

links:-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224202
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222711

I don't like beats like this...Doopty Doo soundin beats

can make a flow choppy

but lets see how yall handle it


1st cat...flow does exactly what I was talkin about, flows with the beat and sounds jumpy...

quality needs to be upped...sounds like ur rappin through a echoey tunnel

lyrics aren't intricate...but they aren't terrible

2nd cat...lots of Highs in ur vocals...but, it sounded crisper than the 1st cat's vocals

flow is straight

nothing special bout these lyrics though


this isn't a bad track, it just lacked direction, IMO.


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