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abstract expressionism
Step your rhyme game up, and put your best foot forward
With the exception of Jonathan Mill, the talent has been dormant Like psychoanalysis, I explore the conscious mind looking for disorders Trying to find a relationship between supernatural influences and forces My behavioral patterns are the symptoms of a disease Following a ritual rhyme scheme and stick to the routine I practice transcendental meditation, I think you should try it When I close my eyelids, I find myself in solitary confinement What you would call a freestyle, I call it abstract expressionism My spontaneous and impulsive application from an specific instance This is metaphor galore, I get deeper then bottomless Why the style you settle for, make me lose consciousness Elevating like levitation, or the leaves in the canopy When I plummet from the summit, I fracture limbs w/ flying knees Most fail where I succeed, I proud of my accomplishments…. Receiving compliments, from kids on other continents I can’t stand when retarded kids try to spit hard like this Then they become targets for this marks-man archery kit If a superior word selection is shown in the right order Your opponents with inferior achievements has to fight harder *GONE* |
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I feel like a mattress.
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This was alright. But nothing really pulled me into it. Ur vocab was nice but for ur flow the lines seemed kinda stretch, so u may wanna work on that. Everything else was cool, just continue to do what u do and u'll get better. Please rtf on anything in my sig. Thanks and Peace.
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this needs improvement.. i didnt like the flow in some parts.. keep advancin on the multies n creativity n youll be good
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