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Nucentz 03-14-06 03:07 PM

Payn vs Nucentz
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-17-06 at 03:07 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 03-14-06 03:08 PM

Nucentz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-06 03:08 PM.

Nucentz 03-14-06 03:17 PM

Im payn your layin on the floor while i walk out the door this aint a battle your about to get rattled for sure im pure im more than you think my rhyme is sublime shit wats the time il have a drink wit sum lemon and lime yo wats your name you say its payn you aint got no game il bust you and tear you apart then take your heart and show it to the world indeed i shall you aint my pal you aint got no rhymes yo you aint even got a dyme so just for that im gonna shine well i gotta go so dont be shy bye bye bye

System 03-14-06 09:18 PM

Payn has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-06 09:18 PM.

Payn 03-14-06 09:25 PM

ight got diz pussy here who wants 2 battle

..shit let me start wit ya quote...1st step 2 recovery is accpetin it..
..in this battle u wont get a vote...accept dat pussy cuz tha mic u aint reackin it..
..next...ya sig wit a custom made rapper...dat Tat looks pretty bad..
..it has a fucked up bullet as tha I...it got dizzy lookin pretty damn sad..
..he calls me scared cuz he know hes gonna lose..
..my hits will knock him out & ill put his alarm on a eternal snooze..
..cuz im killin diz "PUSSY" easily without even rappin my best..
..im still in 1st gear & lyrically still puttin diz rapper 2 rest..
..nucentz he aint terrorising nothin he aint rippin da mic..
..he already said he's gonna lose & i guess hes right..

Payn 03-18-06 09:22 PM

c'mon y'all don't sleep go on ahead & vote on diz 1 here


uppin ...uppin

Wordz AhGod 03-22-06 02:49 PM

Voted For: Payn

ok...this was hard to vote cuz u both were kinda off. I dont really like any of your verses. Payn. you started out ok. ur second line was way too long and your flow could use some work. both of you need to work on punches and personal but I'll vote for payn becouse he made attempts at it as to were Nucentz didn't really try his opponent. honestly if Nucentz could write his verse better and turn his lines into more battle ready rymes...he could be a good battler later on. V/ payn

Nucentz 03-22-06 03:33 PM

yo i respect that thanks man yo cim on sum one give me a vote f#k sake

Payn 03-23-06 10:21 AM

ight thanx 4 tha vote ....uppin 4 more don't sleep

Payn 03-23-06 10:26 AM

yea don't sleep c'mon y'all ....vote up vote up still lookin 4 more votes

u vote on diz battle i will rtf ight no doubt

rexless 03-28-06 10:06 PM

i dont know why i cant vote but i was gonna say payn won this without a dout more focus verse and was more readable and looks like you try an use punches and personal but this wasnt a battle for the elevated section?

vote: pyan..

K~Nyne 04-09-06 09:36 PM

I wasnt feeling this battle much
but overall with more effective punches and delivery I would have to go with Payn...I wasnt really feeling either honestly, butI just have to say that Payn edged it out more.....Nu ya bar structure was off, it look like a paragraph and thats it, and ur punches were pretty simple......so just keep at it

Vote: Payn

Houdini 09-19-06 10:56 PM

Voted For: Payn

cuz im killin diz "PUSSY" easily without even rappin my best..
..im still in 1st gear & lyrically still puttin diz rapper 2 rest..

THis verse was your best rhyme

..nucentz he aint terrorising nothin he aint rippin da mic..
..he already said he's gonna lose & i guess hes right..

as for nucentz U need to check some tutorials or something man...No hate

payns got this.

Critic 09-20-06 03:32 AM

Voted For: Payn

Nucentz got owned did have one punch at all Payn owned
you on his opener simple as that,...

Payn had...
..he calls me scared cuz he know hes gonna lose..
..my hits will knock him out & ill put his alarm on a eternal snooze

Nucentz:
Emmmm no punch sorry man but yor flow is alright but
you wont win shit with no punches...

Vote ~ Payn


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