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eyedentdy vs Nucentz
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-18-06 at 02:46 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Nucentz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-06 02:48 PM.
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your name is eye dentdy im the born supremecy il drink all the hennesy till i get drunk im gonna drop this funk you aint goin no were caause im fast and your slower i no this girl oh you no her well she same sum dumb shit that can get you beatin im eatin n sleepin thats all i gotta do i aint hittin you hard cause i no your a reatard go back to your mental home your mouth is full of shit i no just a bit il slit your neck il bend your arm back till it breaks oh for god sakes im battlen a bitch yo watch out for that ditch im gonna get you a stich for your wrist so ya dont bleed to death i no your girls wet cause i showed her a good time and this is a ill rhyme dont mock me il jock you dont to your ankles or should i call them kankles ur wrinkles are gettin worse wat you gonna do you gave everyone the bird flu you killed to many people and now your times up its time for you to go yes you and your ho so im gonna end this wit a nice good bye but first of all im gonna get so high
peace dawg |
EyeDentdy has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-06 06:46 PM.
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homie I'll destroy you, blow you up like fat kids...
hurry up and drop...I need something to wipe my ass with... you aint giving me nothing, u still nobody in RapVerse... but you log off in style...I'll put spinners on your black herse... ur styles been used befor...like your bitches tampon... I'll beat u till you holla "oh Boy" like that bitch with camron... I'll turn you to a vegeteble...reals niggaz'll toss your salad... you looking curiouse george...but you only fuck with faggets... I'll put your record at negative...and even take ur rappers money... u wanna battle?...shiiet...let me start working on a alamony... |
the last bar... by alamony I ment that after we battle, people are going be interigating me to find out where I was at the time of the murder. Some shit like that.
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Voted For: EyeDentdy
Nucentz, it was hard to make sense of all your rhymes right there buddy...check out a tutorial or somthin, then try your hand at battlin Eye, ya verse was aight, nothin to special, but evidently you got the win here RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=224209 |
good luckin out on the vote. next time just leave a little more detail so I know wat I need to work on but thanks. lets uppin for more votes.
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uppin for some more votes in this bitch...........
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Voted For: EyeDentdy
u had better structure and rymes and also flow nucetz u need to make ur structure alot better and work on ur stuff no hate rtf to http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=223754 |
thanks for the vote...I just need 3 more to shut this shit down
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Voted For: EyeDentdy
I.D. gets this simply cause I can't read the otha cats verse he really need to learn how to write lines and not paragraphs I.D. Best Line Ur styles used before lyk your nitches tampon... I'll beat u till you holla "oh boy" like that bitch wit cam'ron... Worst line I'll turn you to a vegetable real niggas toss your salad.. you looking curious George but you only fuck wit faggots I'd do the same for the next nigga but I can't find where his lines begin and end soooo I.D. got Return the fav fosho ONE |
Voted For: EyeDentdy
ok...this was hard to vote cuz u both were kinda off. I dont really like any of your verses. Eyedenty. you started out ok. ur second line didn't rhyme wit ya 1st and your flow could use some work. both of you need to work on punches and personal but I'll vote for eyedenty because he made attempts at it as to were Nucentz didn't really try his opponent. honestly if Nucentz could write his verse better and turn his lines into more battle ready rhymes...he could be a good battler later on. V/ eyedenty |
thanks for the feed back. this was I think my first net battle in about half a year or so, so my shit is a lil off.
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