Life Is Like A Song
 

yo this just a track i recorded today leave feed ya'll

Life's Like A Song: http://www.soundclick.com/straightaim

and here's my links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224618
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224125

It's different. Here's a tip dont rap so close to the mic. but i like that fact that you chose to rap about something real. for free beats i got you at www.verbalvendett.com

:) yo thanx for the feed man link dont work though :(

ight ya'll no sleepin

flows gettin better
delivery needds some work still yo
feeling your lyrics and shit this beat is dope!
presnece,hmm yo dont seem very confident
add a lil more emotion too

keep elevatin