somethin somethin'
 

this is to the beat of "a lil bit of shush" by lady sovereign.


aight aight. check it.

we aint done yet, NAH we just stepin in.
with a grin on my face when i begin...
to bust down with this crazy flow.
u know lil Scanz is the way 2 go.
so bak up and let me know...
when u pass me the mic 2 start the show.
ima kick it down with the SoV.
u can see that chick on MTv.
but this aint bout her its bout me.
with a lil bit of shush is wut u see.
so pass the bud, and light it up.
raping to this yea we gonna tear it up.
in the Uk or way down here.
the rapunderground has no fear.
to say wut we want and do wut we like.
dont like our shit, then take a hike.
this is for the pure hip-hop nation.
bring that shit in a nu formation.
we grown so strong on this foundation.
sayin wut we want with no hesitation.
stand up to us? we the hole population.
we be original bitch, no imitations.


2 be continued (if liked... :/ )

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This was aight, i lost the flow in a couple places, so try and make ur lines a lil longer. I havent heard the beat so it may be ok on it, but reading it i lost it. Other than that it was ok, u should add some more vocab and rhyming into it. Maybe change up ur rhyme scheme in places to make it flow better. Please rtf on My Mind, links in my sig. Thanks and Peace.

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