Jae Stackz - Me Against The World
 

www.soundclick.com/jaemusik

tell me what ya think its gonna be the last track of the album

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2695307
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224761

i really liked it....great track...good beat, good flow, and good deep lyrics....9/10

Thanks fam//////////

Aight

Dope beat.........

1st verse:
flows nice,wow@your lisp just dissapeared:) deliverys dope as always..........presence is sicckkk!lytrics are koo,yeah i remember you talkin bout this lol im sure you do too:)
feeling the way you ride the beat,suits you man!

Hooks dope,especially that stoppy thing,what ever its called

2nd verse bout the same,consiten

hook

3rd,bout the same,but i felt the lyrics here most,real lyrical point man
hooooooooook!!!!!!!!wooo

good track

overall:9/10

D.C IS FUCKIIIINN BACCKKK!!!!!!!!!

Yessir.............

Beat is tight, I'm feeling it. Your chorus is cool im diggin it too, the verses are fine, i like your flow as well but it gets choppy in some parts. You remind me to a friend from the uk. Anyways dawg, keep bringin hot shit!

pz
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...836#post2695836

Thanks..........

alrigh i'm peeping this right now

the beat is straight not too bad homie

your quality hasn't changed much

but yeah this sounds pretty good.....your flow is cool and emotions there.......the lyrics are pretty nice...this aint too bad

stay up

Thanks.........

Uppin..........

*listenin*

beats notes and melody is raw, but the actual synth is alil generic/corny soundin

but overall the beats good, ur flow is good, and voice is straight, but it sounds like u got like 8 socks on ur mic cuz alot of ur shit sounds muffled...... mixin is pretty good..... and this shit is pretty deep but the hook gets alil repetitive, but i guess ur gettin it embedded in our heads, lol

nice outro mixin.... good shit

rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224618

iight im listenin...

beat is personally not my style some sorrow slow shit na'mean kid..lyrics i can tell have deep meanin...but i dont know why ya voice comes off alil as if you gots a lisp nasty style man...u spit through yo teeth or somethin fam?..no offense just clarify yo words a bit more...cuz you already gots a good voice for rappin you just gotta spit alil more wit better pronounciation iight fam...the tracks decent its just not me..i'd give it a 6.5/10 iight fam Ez 1ne....