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Young Unf Ft.Flex-"Soldier Status"
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Leady-Gay Bashin(Q Diss) Ill Do The Othewr When I Wake Up I Gtg :( Pz |
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the other link:
Implicit and status-Its that real http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2698401 |
flow could be better on this U.N.F., and you need to tighten up your ad-libs, they're not lined up as good as they could be, they can be a lot more even... ya boi Flex's flow was better, didn't say anything special though, definetly nothing extraordinary to me lol on the hook, your "ugh ugh" sounds unenthused, put some more feeling behind it or do some other sound affect that'll give a better affect :thumbup: pretty good, but I've heard better from you |
thanks....thats cause soundclick fucked it up,made it slow n me sound older:(
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...hmm its OK the emotion is Good the beat is aight ur Flow is on point but u dont say anything that is memorable...its like ur Rappin just to be rappin..and apart of ur chorus is a lil off but eh its koo
the Second Cat seemed like he knew what he was doing he was on point but coulda stepped it up a bit but he still aight...lil jay-z flow at the end but eh its kooo keep elevatin ya'll RTF |
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Quality sounds WAY better than it used to lol. 5 less socks and a few hours later.
You should turn the vocal volume down 2-4dB's or pull your reverb level up a tiny bit so your voice blends in to the beat a little more, it's borderline abrasive as it is. The hook fits, first verse flowd, nothing really went wrong. Nothing that made me hop up and go "oh shit that was sick" but on the flipside, nothing that was liek "man, this is WACK". Second verse flow was pretty good, but the rhymescheme was mega ABC, one syl to death. Like the prior verse, it wasn't wack, but it wasn't groundbreaking either. Quality was pretty good on this one. guess that's really all I have to say abotu that one. Peace |
Thanks Fam.........
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ight listening...the hook is ight..im defitnly feeling the flow..the quality is ight nuthin wack..lyrics are ight nuthin special...i could bop my head to this shit
2nd guy:flows ight, lol damn u got some nice punchlines...qualitys about the same, quality doesnt really matter to me..but overall ur decent the beat is cool, i'd probably spit to it but i'd spit to alot of diffrent types of beats.. overall this was an ight track keep it up 7.5/10 |
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