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locknes 03-23-06 10:20 PM

my dome is sick
 
just something i wrote real quickly today
its the second time i mixed i'm starting to learn more how to mix

any wayz here gos

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=503868


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2686159

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224087
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locknes 03-24-06 08:24 AM

uppin for feedback................................

locknes 03-24-06 03:14 PM

^thanks ..........................................

EastCoast 03-24-06 03:17 PM

damn flow started off immediately....nice sig lmao...

....fneed some more emotion....improve ya delivery man....qualtiy needs work, flow is okay but could be improved alot....lyrics are decent....im not really feelin this man....take a little more time with your songs man....

locknes 03-24-06 03:20 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by EastCoast
damn flow started off immediately....nice sig lmao...

....fneed some more emotion....improve ya delivery man....qualtiy needs work, flow is okay but could be improved alot....lyrics are decent....im not really feelin this man....take a little more time with your songs man....

thanks i wrote this real quick so it is what its is


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