NokShuZ- Anything you can do i can do better
 

a lil banga For everyone... i aint gonna give myself feedback on this but eh

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2698627

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2698625

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anything you can do i can Do better

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Playing...
beats ok bit nursery rhyme, that sample voice used is a bit gay, childish and what not. Rhymes are ok, bit simple, you sound like you spit with a lisp or some shit, entire track is ok,but its kinda nursery rhyme bullshit.

not feeling it bro, but meh, keep doing you.

.....nice flow and lyrics.....im likin the vibe....good voice.....shitts pretty good bruh.....only things i aint feelin i the chorus and the fact that a few of the samples are off beat, lol

btw cood you rtf on either of these

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224986

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224985

LOL at da beat........even though it's a lil simple it goes well with ur lyrics.....ya flow wuz nice, quality could be upped a lil bit, but it wuz decent, aiite man......

pz

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Listening through some Audio Technica ATH M40 fs's

You should sould adress either your mic or the echo where you're at cuz it's got some MEAN buzz to it. The beat's cool, I could def see better flips of that sample. The first verse was pretty cool, I'd expect some heavy punches and braggodcio on the first verse, sorta liek what you brought on the second verse which bounced more on the flow and kept it alive. The third verse sounded like a combo from the first two, from the "no nikkuuhh" to the flow.

The only thing other than the vocal qual I'd change is to rhyme that last bar on the verse with the sample "I can do anything better than you" so it transitioned into it and not seemed like it came outta nowhere. More braggo woulnd't have hurt either in my opinion, would really pushed the track over the edge for me peronsally. peace

I like the beat and the sample

ur flow was appropriate...but, I agree with apexx that it lacks braggadocio

Up that

YOu have potential bro...keep droppin


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thankz everyone...i cant drop no more tracks for a while kuzz my mic is all messed up unless i go to muh boiz crib or sumthin...so dont expect any tracks from me for a while but ill be on the site lookin out for ya'll leavin Feedback till then....thanks for the feedback

lol..damn this shits dope man....the sample is killin it....the beats ill a hell...ur flows nice as hell with it..got a nice voice on it...lol @ furbys...this is deff a ill song man


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