hey cory.
 

this is for u cory hahahaha.


talk about wack rhymes,15 threads and none past 13 replies.*
most of them are disses but if u get a "nice job" u know the lies.
u think u a thug cus u write east side with 2 threes.
if u wanna see a real thug then come down here G.
wow u part of the rapkingz big whoopty doo
they proable let u in cus them fuckers pitty u.
fuckin bitch i tell u to elevate cus ur rhymes are lame.
u couldnt get fame if u had a decent name.
ur structure is more fucked up then micheal jackson.
he thinks he is petter pan, u think ur good at rapping.
well u need to check the mirror, cus they aint dope.
to find a decent rap gene in u, u have to use a microscope.
start lookin fool, but i doubt u got a decent one in you.
and if u dont find one, dont worry, ill air mail one 4 u.
and how true is it that u like to suck a big horse dick.
i saw a clip of some dude but i didnt know u look like this.**
shit, how gay can u get when u need to fuck a horse.
thats more fucked up then the frase "use the force".
i got enough force to blow u into a thousand pieces.
ill be on your ass faster then the police is.

choke on that for awhile bitch. :thumbup:

*- last checked. only one of his freestyle passed 10 replies. and they all disses.
** http://www.dolshouse.com/queensmen/image/ricky2.jpg (lol close enough 2 him)

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223200
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222961

talk about wack rhymes,15 threads and none past 13 replies.*
most of them are disses but if u get a "nice job" u know the lies.
k 5/10 not so good
u think u a thug cus u write east side with 2 threes.
if u wanna see a real thug then come down here G.
eh real simple 5/10
wow u part of the rapkingz big whoopty doo
they proable let u in cus them fuckers pitty u.
ok 5/10
fuckin bitch i tell u to elevate cus ur rhymes are lame.
u couldnt get fame if u had a decent name.
that was ight 5/10
ur structure is more fucked up then micheal jackson.
he thinks he is petter pan, u think ur good at rapping.
no 2/10
well u need to check the mirror, cus they aint dope.
to find a decent rap gene in u, u have to use a microscope.
nah didnt like it 2/10
start lookin fool, but i doubt u got a decent one in you.
and if u dont find one, dont worry, ill air mail one 4 u.
wack 2/10
and how true is it that u like to suck a big horse dick.
i saw a clip of some dude but i didnt know u look like this.**
nah stupid 3/10
shit, how gay can u get when u need to fuck a horse.
thats more fucked up then the frase "use the force".
nah lol gay 2/10
i got enough force to blow u into a thousand pieces.
ill be on your ass faster then the police is.
nah that was wack 3/10

overal that shit was wack no hate just facts nah mean, but dont give up ight 1

over all score??? lol

ok but u did better that cory guy does suck.......lol work on ur deliverly and flow and u will get it......................keep on trying...................