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CHECK OUT THIS SHIT ITS FUCKING FIRE!!!!!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3701928

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225107
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225008

WTF? whys this shit gettin slep on?? but all the wack ass shit is gettin replies


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Uppin This Shit One More Time Come On

listening..

liking the beat..

intro is cool...

flow is good, delivery is on point.. flow doesnt stop at all.. thats good.. likin verse so far..

Chorus: chorus is good.. catchy, but not catchy enough, could improve alittle on that..

iight 2nd verse same like 1st verse, but should try to change it alittle, cuz its sorta like u listening to same verse agen.. if u know wut i mean..

lol u extend the beat too long haha.. got me waiting for a 3rd verse.. darn u lol.. 8/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225195

[plz rtf...

y do i leave feed wen i get none back :(

cause people dont like mainstream? -_-

If people dont like mainstream why is it more popular?

nah..people like mainstream..but i guess not here..i kno me..i aint down wit no snap music..all mainstream shit is garbage..

Not all mainstream shit is garbage

you just hate mainstream cuz its mainstream

its a trend...i know

Since when are bitches blunts and cars not good??

we rap about what we like righhht?? well there ya go

this is a underground based site?? well how theres more 50 cent threads then well any other site i've ever been on

lol woah past tense.. wut happend to the christian rapper guy? lol.. u should know this aint really a mainsteam site.. if u like to get mainsteam feedback, go to another rap forum that likes mainstream.. but this a cool song.. gots lot of potential.. jst should be a little longer if its to be a clubin song..

youngstas..sorry but i dont follow trends lil boy..i dont hate mainstream cause everybody else does..i hate it cause really wtf are u sayin..then these wack ass rappers come talkin about" Yea im tryna bring hip hop back"..that shit is far from hip hop..its rap music..and i dont rap about what i like thats not me really..i rap about whats real i rap about life and what i live..i rap about shit others can relate to..besides what i like i cant afford so y stunt like i can..the way i see it..i dont rap about it if i dont have it..and you might be sayin.."how he talkin bout rap isnt hip hop, but he sayin he raps this and that?!"..cause hip hop is what i live and rap is what i do..

The beat's mega basic on the melody and ALMOST spoiled the whole beat imo.

Quality's on point. lyrics make perfect sense especially for hte type of track this is. Hook is nice and groovable, the type of thing that does well in a club.

Second verse was more of what the first brought, no out of place lyrics and the flow stayed in the groove.
I could could see this playin in the local clubs, to be real. Kinda feels like some pharel type stuff, real light and airy built up on synths. I'd play it.



http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225217<-----do the right thing

Aight good looks


UPPIN!!

man this is a good track, no matter what, you aint gonna make it big on the radio if aint sumthin most people can feel, quality was good to me, your delivery was perfect for the beat, your voice matched perfect on the beat, and your words were right on the beat, good track, for the radios or clubs