Knight SirRebral vs SKAAL
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 04-02-06 at 12:44 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

SKAAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-06 11:10 AM.

i got this, eazzzzzzzy


this is a warrior up against a 'knight' with a wooden-sword
i'm an over-lord stab daggers thru ya vocal-chords
you half way horror-core, three quarters kiddie music
claimed to be a rida,but in this battle you didn't prove it
how bout this:, i'll bring tha start to ya bad-day
a 'bright idea'- i should stick tha hawk thru ya 'lamp-shade'
i killed ya boys first, drop you off where ya man-lay
then down a fifth of liqour,take a piss on ya damn-grave
at first he was 'gassed up', but now 'he's-on-E'
i'm like 'jesus', so i bet he try to 'feed-off-me'
pleeese, my~aim~is~lethal~get~mean~wit~this~desert~eagle
he~"feenin"~my~flows~tha~"needle"~leak~blood~out~ya~'cerebral'
since i done knocked out ya punch lines and dissed all ya diss songs
without a thought you done i'm suprised it took this long

my bad i meant to put sum like 20-30 is that cool wit you?

Knight SirRebral has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-31-06 02:33 AM.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171119 *
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173141 **
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167844 ***


I'm ready to break ya skaal homie i'm leavin you dead
you see Knight Sir Rebral's "Coretext'' so i'm already inside your head
You got merked by a string, what you gon do in this thread
go vote on 20 different battles cause strobe won't even give you cred
SirRebrals a Knight, instead the skaal's protectin me
every punch you throws to your own face, not effective G
last i'll crack your cranium in half your 2 choices are...well
Do SKA, which you can't "rock" crowds, so just leave here with A L
You a carbon copy of wack so i'm just rapin a stencil
you lost to skriptz, you can't even beat your paper and pencil
A penny for my thoughts i'll drop dimes on you, feel the wealth
Live by it die by it, this game's in your blood? Fine Go kill yourself
Still in stealth my punches hit you and you'll fall to the floor
your a pussy to me, a dick to some, but still a Bal-ti-more
Your a herb. So weed, walk. My bad we'll see the dro step
i'll peep your verse and say "are you.....oh my bad the only clue was your neck"*
When i heard you i thought that you were a dick, or hard, you threw me, your too lace
you know what threw me off...were the pubic hairs on your face
you can't drop your lips so dry they absorbin your spit more so
i'd say i pull the strings but your nose hairs as big as my torso
only one thing for the second pic i'm sayin about**
told you hot, i knocked this nigga out and came in his mouth
Damn another pic, we all clean but you rap's janitor***
be nice if you spent more time with the mic and less with the camera
I'm not your tatto,dis-play, you'll be left in a museum after this are you kiddin
hey guys you don't have to be a ride....or be a pimp to be an xzibit
"hey kids can i have some competition" no but you can have a loss
speak on this battle cause this thread stay all up in ya mouth like floss
I thought you was new, 3 pics on this site you stay on the sofa
just like your life when you turn off the computer, this battle's ova


Skaal-skull
He's from baltimore

that's pretty much it. GL

Voted For: Knight SirRebral

You a carbon copy of wack so i'm just rapin a stencil
you lost to skriptz, you can't even beat your paper and pencil
A penny for my thoughts i'll drop dimes on you, feel the wealth
Live by it die by it, this game's in your blood? Fine Go kill yourself

vs

since i done knocked out ya punch lines and dissed all ya diss songs
without a thought you done i'm suprised it took this long


basically this is all i could compare, due to the fact that neither of you coming hard on this one. But at least Knight had more than one punch in his verse. It's like SKAAL just wrote a 6 bar filler as his only real punch came in his closing bar, and even that wasn't hitting too hard. It was so-so but nothing more.

SKAAL, you need to concentrate on actual punches instead of putting in random violence and hoping for the best which is what you seemed to be doing in this battle.

Knight you should keep it short and sweet, especially when you have a limited number of decent punches in the verse because when you have a few punches in a verse of that size, it's like the punches aren't concentrated enough. Some of your punches were seriously lacking and that's why I didn't mention it at the beginning

Both of you need to up your creativity, because those punches weren't really too witty or that great in general.
You could follow this structure:

Set up line,
Punch line,

in each bar and that would have you on your way to improving as battlers.

The quality of your verses pound for pound was about the same in my honest opinion so all i can do is choose the winner by the consistency of these punches.

so the winner is Knight

Relax man the verse was a keystyle that took sum like 20 mins to do. Uppin..




oh and thanks for the vote

This was feedback posted for SKAAL
 

what the fuck is up with your gay ass "~~~~~~~" connecting words and shit
that's retarded.cut that shit out before i poop on your forhead

Vote so i can win............................................... .......

Voted For: Knight SirRebral

Knight SirRebral:
I'm ready to break ya skaal homie i'm leavin you dead
you see Knight Sir Rebral's "Coretext'' so i'm already inside your head
4/10 - OK Opener.
You got merked by a string, what you gon do in this thread
go vote on 20 different battles cause strobe won't even give you cred
6/10 - Niice Punch.
SirRebrals a Knight, instead the skaal's protectin me
every punch you throws to your own face, not effective G
2/10 - No.
last i'll crack your cranium in half your 2 choices are...well
Do SKA, which you can't "rock" crowds, so just leave here with A L
2/10 - NO.
You a carbon copy of wack so i'm just rapin a stencil
you lost to skriptz, you can't even beat your paper and pencil
3/10 - OK.
A penny for my thoughts i'll drop dimes on you, feel the wealth
Live by it die by it, this game's in your blood? Fine Go kill yourself
2/10 - NO.
Still in stealth my punches hit you and you'll fall to the floor
your a pussy to me, a dick to some, but still a Bal-ti-more
5/10 - Niice.
Your a herb. So weed, walk. My bad we'll see the dro step
i'll peep your verse and say "are you.....oh my bad the only clue was your neck"*
1/10 - NO.
When i heard you i thought that you were a dick, or hard, you threw me, your too lace
you know what threw me off...were the pubic hairs on your face
3/10 - OK.
you can't drop your lips so dry they absorbin your spit more so
i'd say i pull the strings but your nose hairs as big as my torso
1/10 - NO.
only one thing for the second pic i'm sayin about**
told you hot, i knocked this nigga out and came in his mouth
0/10 - EWWWW.
Damn another pic, we all clean but you rap's janitor***
be nice if you spent more time with the mic and less with the camera
0/10 - ; live this shit out.
I'm not your tatto,dis-play, you'll be left in a museum after this are you kiddin
hey guys you don't have to be a ride....or be a pimp to be an xzibit
1/10
"hey kids can i have some competition" no but you can have a loss
speak on this battle cause this thread stay all up in ya mouth like floss
3/10
I thought you was new, 3 pics on this site you stay on the sofa
just like your life when you turn off the computer, this battle's ova
3/10
37/150=25%

Voted For: SKAAL

wow....u guyz need to elevate a lot....

oh well...I give this battle Skaal becouse knights verse was really boaring and he used the letter 'g' to rhyme cuz he aint have nothing else I guess.... that really killed it for me along a lot of other things...

Skaal came too simple...need to elevate the style dowg....if u aint gonna give a punch then give a flow...but each line should have something special dogg....I kinda liked ur 2nd bar a lil...thats why u get my vote dawg....but both of u....keep coming up and stay active...

V/Skaal....

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