ill styla
 

getting the large cash stacks with numerous stashes,
cause money dont grow on trees but dont banks have branches,
when time does come to collecting the cream,
fuck playing clean if you find yourself at the place you were last seen,
these days life just aint promised,
you can even say its sort of like the prophecies of nostradamus,
deep thoughts got me paused as sentance do comma's,
lose quick the bullshit and fuck all the drama's,
lacing the beat with raps to syrup the track,
similar to that of speacial moments needing kodac,
words i crave for the page pens enslaved,
stubb yo self out my lyrics smoke you all into ashtrays,
throwing out syringes with high dosage of flow,
shit that can turn dust to gold or diamonds back into coal,
ill styla yeah above the average type sniper,
rewind this just to recite my words and decypher,
hyrogliphics be spit shit that you cant fathem,
my rhymes and beats be like bruce lee and green lantern :thumbup:

yo overall this was a nice drop yo. you had some nice rhymes, just gotta add more to them to stand out more and shit, ya feel me? but flow wise you got it down. but work on it a bit and you get better. RTF if you can. pc

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getting the large cash stacks with numerous stashes,
cause money dont grow on trees but dont banks have branches,
these days life just aint promised,
you can even say its sort of like the prophecies of nostradamus,

those were cool and ya best lines

the rest was off though, seemed like you rushed this or something, didnt look like alot of thought went into alot of those lines, which means you should take more time on ya shit so it turns out better. keep dropping man, i see some potential

Meh... It's aiight you need to keep practicing and you'll get dope.