Begining and End
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3719341

"begining and end" ^^^ some laid back shit ^^


1st verse = Mind Immortal

hook = me

2nd verse = me

=hook= me

3rd verse

mind immortal then me

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SenseR-BX
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2704571

enygma and UNF-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225279

I heard this on AIM.

M.I. had a creative flow scheme with the syllables. But, there were relatively few rhyming pairs at the start. That threw me off a bit. The "nigga" line seemed out of character. Otherwise, the flow was good and the lyrics weren't bad.


CHO...everything was solid, except the "mind immortal" line. THat would have made more since had M.I. spit it.


Good drop tho



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yep decent track

its nice to know the infiniTE elite drops props...aight yall back to class...intro to programming...lol i am gonna fail this shit ...

lisinin first dude was straight good flow straight lyrics....hooks is good i like that shit 2nd verse was good l liked how it flowed and some good lines....3rd verse was proboly the best imo i liked it good track

rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225391

Wow.....Cho slowed down a little...lol. This is a dope track though guys :thumbup:™

gooooooooooood lookin ppls

holyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy sheep shit

1st MC- nice flow , lyrics is strate kept to concept of the song
Hook is average
2nd MC - flow is good, lyrics are good the way you constructed it...............
both MCs at the end came as they did above.........overall strate track......

pz

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songs good.....
first verse....yea its good, pretty deep way to stay on subject...
hook- think it needs an effect to diffirenate it from cho's verse
cho - pretty good...you spit to the beat with an intresting flow scheme i like it
3rd vesre.....eh, nothing special but kept up near the level of the first two

pretty good tack....good drop

thxxxxxxxxx buddy...nice to see some honest feed.....


especialy like to see some critique i can actualy use

Mind Immortal:
I like the way you rap, the way you flex your voice kinda sound dumb. Just be yourself man. the flow was pretty strong and steady, delivery wasn't to bad, also goes with what I said about with the flexing of the voice.

Cho
You sound almost identical to Mind Immortal. But I can till that it's you cause of your lyrics, good ways of writting and also different from his. Your flow was almost the same man, also your delivery and the flexxed voice. Unless yall went with that style of sound it's not bad.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225805

thxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx willllllllllllllllll dooooooooooooo

K...returning favor..typin as listening....oh naw I aint likign how son came in....he is OVER-forcing his voice...if u he jus used his normal tone this verse woulda been so much stronger....k..next verse....damn u got a over-exaggerated tone too...u do it a lil better but the exaggerated voice got played out in the 80s fam....ya flow was somewhat rushed IMO....this beat is weird...but I like...I like the conceptualism...an the abstract approach but u aint execute it how u could have, this song oozes potential...but yall delivery hurt ya, ya flows was sparatic...for a few bars u was right then you'd lose it for a few then comeback....lyrically simplistic format...but conceptually nice...yall kinda on sum Murs shit...he uses a simplistic type rhymes but has a deep message...this wasn't persay a deep track but it was unique an I enjoyed it for most part...I jus think it coulda been better....didn't like that lil bridge yall did when beat dropped either..if yall coulda made that more catchy it woulda took focus away from a few of the other flaws as well. But all in all this was a decent track...jus needs that polish ya know...anyways this the first time I ever peeped you cho & MI for that matter too...keep dropping.......1